Pink Curls

Her little feelings so fragile.
Secrets she whispers in her doll's ear.
Blanket and her fears soothed.



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dutta Avatar
February 3, 2019 at 9:37 AM
Nice approach to share with doll. I appreciate.
Gauthier Avatar
February 3, 2019 at 11:22 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Anisha.
Wolf Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 11:17 PM
Yes! Yes! Yes! So vivid! I can see it perfectly! You have nailed a moment that is so precious that one wants to bottle it---and you have!... Better than any photo of the the same thing. Bravo! :) gw
Gauthier Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 2:41 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon, for your most appreciated visit and compliment.
Blanca Avatar
January 30, 2019 at 6:48 PM
Your doll does not judge you or mock what you say. I sure like this one. Line
Gauthier Avatar
January 30, 2019 at 9:10 PM
Thanks, Arbol. We should all have a doll throughout our life.
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