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Everlasting Gobstoppers - Charlie and the Chocolate Factory

Pink Carnations-Cloud Drifting

pink carnations ~ ~ cloud drifting visage in the redolence of autumn unpretentious goosebumps countenance of this old lady, pretty cool calculating glory in seemingly little things sampling of gifts ~~ ultra mysterious everlasting gobstoppers, multi-layered* showstoppers, glory after glory ever growing, ever glowing S U N R E S T the Artist never stops creating bliss and joy ultrasensory H A P P I N E S S carnations that remind me of my mother God winks in this parking space before the arctic air ~ fresh air scented gifting reminds me of my God my God, my God ~ His name is written everywhere cloud drifting ~ my mind afloat my inner smile with reticent grief zephyr-peace of gladness opalescent paradise
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October 5, 2025 at 8:14 PM
I like the way this poem has been written, using all the tools that we can use, italics, caps lock, symbols, a beautiful effect it gives!!
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October 6, 2025 at 4:29 AM
Thank you…smiling :)
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October 2, 2025 at 4:52 PM
wow, this is a magnificent poem! Actually, I think its brilliant in form and message. hugs, Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
October 2, 2025 at 5:57 PM
Thank you so much, Sara!
Hind Avatar
October 2, 2025 at 2:41 PM
"before the arctic air ~ fresh air scented gifting reminds me of my God my God, my God ~ His name is written everywhere" wow, you turned that Scripture around, this seems shallow to say, but genius....or gift :) <3
Rodrigues Avatar
October 2, 2025 at 2:45 PM
Thank you kindly, Paige! Hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
October 2, 2025 at 2:14 PM
What a lovely write you have here.  I enjoyed reading this one. "Good Luck" if for a contest.  Have a fun day writing away.........
Rodrigues Avatar
October 2, 2025 at 2:45 PM
Thank you, Paula!
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