Pink

Healing sweetness waits in pregnant pomegranates. Winter kisses Spring. The world of little girls swirls with pinkish delights and frills!

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Date: 6/14/2013 12:29:00 AM

gosh, this one would have been perfect in my contest I had on colors a while back. Wish I'd had this one in the contest!!! Love it.

David De La Croes
Date: 6/14/2013 1:00:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. I wrote it at the same time as your contest, but did not think that it qualified... David

Date: 5/14/2013 3:38:00 PM

very lovely tanka David, enjoyed the read.. ~luv P.d.

Date: 5/14/2013 8:34:00 AM

I really like the line "Winter kisses Spring", a very sweet poem. Thanks for the read :)

David De La Croes
Date: 5/15/2013 2:18:00 AM

Thanks Mitchell.

Date: 5/14/2013 2:48:00 AM

- Lovely, David! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

David De La Croes
Date: 5/14/2013 5:16:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise. Glad you like it... David

Date: 5/14/2013 1:09:00 AM

David: ....this is delightful. A snapshot of innocence. SuZ

David De La Croes
Date: 5/14/2013 5:16:00 AM

Thank you, Suz.

Date: 5/11/2013 2:17:00 PM

I really enjoyed reading this vision of swirling pink with images of little girls and pomegranates. Nice contrasts!

David De La Croes
Date: 5/14/2013 5:15:00 AM

Thank you, Karen. Having a granddaughter means being surrounded by pink! David

Date: 5/9/2013 2:04:00 PM

Btw the no. of lines in a tanka should be 5 :)

David De La Croes
Date: 5/9/2013 10:32:00 PM

Thanks, Kash! Saved me from much embarrassment! Go well. David

Date: 5/9/2013 2:03:00 PM

Very nice !Enjoyed this.