Pink

Healing sweetness waits
in pregnant pomegranates.
Winter kisses Spring.
The world of little girls swirls
with pinkish delights and frills!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 12:29 AM
gosh, this one would have been perfect in my contest I had on colors a while back. Wish I'd had this one in the contest!!! Love it.
De La Croes Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 1:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea. I wrote it at the same time as your contest, but did not think that it qualified... David
A   Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 3:38 PM
very lovely tanka David, enjoyed the read.. ~luv P.d.
Eadie Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 8:34 AM
I really like the line "Winter kisses Spring", a very sweet poem. Thanks for the read :)
De La Croes Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 2:18 AM
Thanks Mitchell.
Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 2:48 AM
- Lovely, David! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
De La Croes Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 5:16 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. Glad you like it... David
Delaney Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 1:09 AM
David: ....this is delightful. A snapshot of innocence. SuZ
De La Croes Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 5:16 AM
Thank you, Suz.
Anglesey Avatar
May 11, 2013 at 2:17 PM
I really enjoyed reading this vision of swirling pink with images of little girls and pomegranates. Nice contrasts!
De La Croes Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 5:15 AM
Thank you, Karen. Having a granddaughter means being surrounded by pink! David
Poet Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 2:04 PM
Btw the no. of lines in a tanka should be 5 :)
De La Croes Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 10:32 PM
Thanks, Kash! Saved me from much embarrassment! Go well. David
Poet Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 2:03 PM
Very nice !Enjoyed this.
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