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There is a magic zing-- a nice warm cheer When with eyes, a-twinkling On soft shoulders, each-clinging Two hearts attuned, are singing.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/24/2008 10:04:00 PM
what atune!! adore!
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Date: 10/2/2008 2:13:00 PM
Nice like use of this challenging form. Interesting title--and it rhymes with the lines. I like the lighthearted feel of this poem. Thank you for sharing it with us and for you kind comments on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 9/30/2008 3:14:00 PM
two is always better than one, someone to share your highs and lows of life, great write, take care D-nyce
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