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There is a magic zing-- a nice warm cheer
When with eyes, a-twinkling
On soft shoulders, each-clinging
Two hearts attuned, are singing.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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October 24, 2008 at 10:04 PM
what atune!! adore!
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October 2, 2008 at 2:13 PM
Nice like use of this challenging form. Interesting title--and it rhymes with the lines. I like the lighthearted feel of this poem. Thank you for sharing it with us and for you kind comments on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen
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September 30, 2008 at 3:14 PM
two is always better than one, someone to share your highs and lows of life, great write, take care D-nyce
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