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pines sigh in brisk breeze spring-green dots the pine forest.... birds chirp at sunrise nest being built in new houses cardinal bathes in birdbath He's going to court his pick for this season

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Ink Empress

Date: 3/25/2024 4:00:00 PM

This is absolutely serene and soulfully divine, i love the way it flows in such a picturesque manner dear Sara, youv written a very springy poem that many would adore. I love every word woven in this. Pleasure reading your work always

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/26/2024 8:05:00 AM

IE, I am glad that you liked it. I was enjoying watching that cardinal take his bath. Getting ready for his first spring date I would guess. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/25/2024 9:04:00 AM

a poem filled with serenity via your descriptive details (birds chirp at sunrise and cardinal bathes in birdbath). Thanks for sharing this nature-filled moment with us. Have a splendid day, hugs, Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/25/2024 10:50:00 AM

Sara B, Yes, it was a serene scene for just a moment in time. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/25/2024 8:44:00 AM

Dear Sara, This is such a peaceful picture! I can practically hear the wind whispering through the needles and see the green shoots peeking through. The little details, like the bird building its nest and the cardinal taking a bath, bring the scene to life. It makes me long for a quiet morning in nature. - Blessings, Daniel

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/25/2024 8:48:00 AM

I hope you get that quiet morning in nature soon, Daniel. We all need that in our lives. I am so honored that you found this one so impressive. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/25/2024 7:40:00 AM

Love seeing Spring through your eyes! You truly show your love for nature. Hugs and blessings, dear Sara!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/25/2024 8:30:00 AM

Thank you, Kim. Out in the cold easterly wind just now walking the dog and getting inspiration. Sara K