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Pine needles were left in designs of waves on the sand Where the wind like a paint brush, left them on the ground I walk by this painting, created perfectly by nature A wisp of soft waves displayed, almost alluring As I stare, my mind drifts with the waves and I see Things that touch my heart like the tip of a pine needle Softly touching me, painting a delicate message --- Everything is Okay --- Heidi Sands 7/7/17 Placed 1st in the Late FEB 2019 Poetry Contest. Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 2/24/2019 11:58:00 AM
Nature does indeed paint many beautiful pictures. Tom.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/24/2019 12:41:00 PM
Yes, nature sure does. I am glad your comment came through on this . Thank you Tom :)
Date: 2/23/2019 7:26:00 PM
I am told there has been some problem with being able to comment on this poem. I don't know why, but I am seeking to find out why.
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Date: 2/23/2019 4:24:00 PM
Beautiful Heidi, Congrats on your first place win.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/23/2019 4:36:00 PM
Thank you Sandy and I am happy to see you got through to comment. I appreciate it very much :)
Date: 2/23/2019 9:58:00 AM
Mother nature at her finest, for sure. We can find beautiful art everywhere when we open our eyes and mind to look deeper than the surface! This is truly outstanding. Congratulations on your win!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/23/2019 10:01:00 AM
Thank you very much :)
Date: 2/22/2019 4:36:00 PM
Yes--nature's design revealed in your words..congrats on your win, Heidi..a lovely poem.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/22/2019 4:48:00 PM
Thank you Vijay. I appreciate all your support ! Have a nice evening :)
Date: 7/9/2017 4:39:00 PM
nice
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/9/2017 5:05:00 PM
Thank you for checking. For some reason poets Jan and Freddie can't get through today (7/9) on this one.
Date: 7/7/2017 12:40:00 PM
The title alone hooked me as I was strolling past and now that I have read the piece and seen the photos, wow Heidi, this was wonderful and filled with the beauty of nature. "Pine needle designs" I wish I had though of that. :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/7/2017 12:46:00 PM
Thank you for strolling to this and leaving this kind comment, my friend. :)
Date: 7/7/2017 12:31:00 PM
This is really cool Heidi. And you have described the scene and your feelings very well. - Dean
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/7/2017 12:34:00 PM
Hi Dean! Thank you very much :)
Date: 7/7/2017 11:12:00 AM
oh wow Heidi I would have loved to see this - you must take or paint a picture:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/7/2017 12:34:00 PM
I added 2 photos, that was the best I could do with them lol
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/7/2017 11:15:00 AM
It was really neat Jan. I will try to get a photo, if it hasn't changed and it comes out ok, I may add it to the poem. Thanks for you comment :)

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