Heidi Sands Poet Free verse

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Pine Needle Designs

Pine needles were left in designs of waves on the sand
Where the wind like a paint brush, left them on the ground
I walk by this painting, created perfectly by nature 
A wisp of soft waves displayed, almost alluring
As I stare, my mind drifts with the waves and I see
Things that touch my heart like the tip of a pine needle
Softly touching me, painting a delicate message
                    --- Everything is Okay ---


Heidi Sands

7/7/17

Placed 1st in the Late FEB 2019 Poetry Contest. Sponsor:  Brian Strand

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Tom Cunningham February 24, 2019 at 11:58 AM Nature does indeed paint many beautiful pictures. Tom. Heidi Sands February 24, 2019 at 12:41 PM Yes, nature sure does. I am glad your comment came through on this . Thank you Tom :)

Heidi Sands February 23, 2019 at 7:26 PM I am told there has been some problem with being able to comment on this poem. I don't know why, but I am seeking to find out why.

Sherilynn Kucharek February 23, 2019 at 9:58 AM Mother nature at her finest, for sure. We can find beautiful art everywhere when we open our eyes and mind to look deeper than the surface! This is truly outstanding. Congratulations on your win! Heidi Sands February 23, 2019 at 10:01 AM Thank you very much :)

Vijay Pandit February 22, 2019 at 4:36 PM Yes--nature's design revealed in your words..congrats on your win, Heidi..a lovely poem. Heidi Sands February 22, 2019 at 4:48 PM Thank you Vijay. I appreciate all your support ! Have a nice evening :)

Team Poetrysoup July 9, 2017 at 4:39 PM nice Heidi Sands July 9, 2017 at 5:05 PM Thank you for checking. For some reason poets Jan and Freddie can't get through today (7/9) on this one.

Chris Green July 7, 2017 at 12:40 PM The title alone hooked me as I was strolling past and now that I have read the piece and seen the photos, wow Heidi, this was wonderful and filled with the beauty of nature. "Pine needle designs" I wish I had though of that. :) Heidi Sands July 7, 2017 at 12:46 PM Thank you for strolling to this and leaving this kind comment, my friend. :)

Dean Wood July 7, 2017 at 12:31 PM This is really cool Heidi. And you have described the scene and your feelings very well. - Dean Heidi Sands July 7, 2017 at 12:34 PM Hi Dean! Thank you very much :)

Jan Allison July 7, 2017 at 11:12 AM oh wow Heidi I would have loved to see this - you must take or paint a picture:-) hugs Jan xx Heidi Sands July 7, 2017 at 12:34 PM I added 2 photos, that was the best I could do with them lol Heidi Sands July 7, 2017 at 11:15 AM It was really neat Jan. I will try to get a photo, if it hasn't changed and it comes out ok, I may add it to the poem. Thanks for you comment :)