Pine and Pond

Pine and pond
Shadow across the water
Lengthening the days
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Alexandria Avatar
March 12, 2009 at 12:30 PM
This is very good! I absolutely love your writing. Thank you for the comment, by the way.
Richards Avatar
October 9, 2008 at 10:59 AM
A peaceful, serene poem. Nice! ~Carrie
Degenhardt Avatar
October 9, 2008 at 9:06 AM
While the first line would need 2 more syllables to be a typical Haiku, I find this read wonderful in its imagery and natural flow of words. Very well written. Michael
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