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Pine and Pond

Pine and pond Shadow across the water Lengthening the days

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 3/12/2009 12:30:00 PM
This is very good! I absolutely love your writing. Thank you for the comment, by the way.
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Date: 10/9/2008 10:59:00 AM
A peaceful, serene poem. Nice! ~Carrie
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Date: 10/9/2008 9:06:00 AM
While the first line would need 2 more syllables to be a typical Haiku, I find this read wonderful in its imagery and natural flow of words. Very well written. Michael
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