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The main parts of a pin ball machine are:

Play field, Flipper, Plunger, Tilt sensors, Bumpers, Holes, Balls.

Pinballs Flashing lights cacophonous torment silent blindness screams of nothing Plunger lost in apathy comfortless striking void pistons firing on empty Flippers halted in stagnant mid flight motionless surreal delusion Sensors tilted upside down and further making no sense of no meaning Bumpers like icy mountain’s thin air pick axe forgotten on the descent Sink holes covered in quick sand vacuous craters enveloped madness A ‘level’ play field and yet where are those balls of courage to tell them how I really felt? 09th August 2018-08-08 Written for the contest: ‘I wish I had the balls to tell them how I really felt’. Sponsored by Line Gauthier

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Date: 8/13/2018 12:00:00 AM
Excellent writing, great imagery, a very compelling analogy.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 8/13/2018 1:09:00 AM
Thank you Lawrence. Many wishes to you, Kai
Date: 8/9/2018 4:28:00 AM
Depression is horrible, I can only say, never let it be suffered alone, easy to say, hard to do, I know!
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 8/9/2018 4:31:00 AM
I am very much on the ball with it. Feeling good. Was a long journey, but love and also poetry have helped me a lot. Many wishes to you, Kai

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