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Pills Knock Me Out and Take Me Down

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This is SO true! I woke up at 10:30 a.m. today, and I am meeting my girlfriend downtown at 11:30. Got to go!

Take these pills three times a day. Not crazy for regular people. Who aren’t held hostage Or in comas by pills. Crazy for me. And I suspected it. So I did something I had never done. I pressed pharmacy consultation Before I left the Drug pill store. Pills knock me out and take me down I told the pill pusher there. Do you think I need three of these a day? She stared into my heart hard. It sped up, being pulled out, like that. Take one a day, to start, she told me. If that does not work, try two. I trusted her instantly. Thanked her and took my little white bag away. $4.08 worth of something. One pill kept me In a comatose state For 16 hours. Muscle relaxers. Damn!

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Date: 7/12/2018 4:39:00 PM
There sure are pills for everything. We rattle sometimes lol
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