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Pillowcase

With lonesome fingers I now trace the lost impression of your face that once compressed my pillowcase washed away but not erased now by polka dots of tears replaced

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/7/2012 10:37:00 AM
your play with words is beyond compare, and with the public you must share
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Date: 9/7/2012 8:36:00 AM
I think it is a great blessing to be able to feel so deeply and express it so well. The Poet is alive and kicking!, Warm thoughts, Ralph
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L.Ruby Meyer
Date: 9/10/2012 7:49:00 PM
Ralph, thank you, and I do feel blessed, especially to share what is within me, and read and share what is within the minds and hearts of others ,such as yourself! X Peace Ruby
Date: 8/26/2012 5:31:00 PM
Ruby, very nice. love your poem.., thank you for sharing, xox~PD
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L.Ruby Meyer
Date: 9/7/2012 12:44:00 AM
Thank you for sharing with me too Poet Destroyer, I enjoy your work> x peace Ruby
Date: 8/26/2012 10:00:00 AM
Loss of love so vividly described. Your imagery is so real, your pain becomes those who read your work. Love it! Lay
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L.Ruby Meyer
Date: 9/7/2012 12:46:00 AM
Lay, I am a fan of your expression, even your comments here to me are poetic, heartfelt and moving. Thank you . X Peace Ruby
Date: 8/25/2012 11:13:00 PM
A sad poem, but nicely composed.
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L.Ruby Meyer
Date: 9/10/2012 7:44:00 PM
Thank you Robert! x Peace, Ruby

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