Pillow Book

In the library, we meet a young lady; her study, it does overwhelm,
Resting, laying her head down, she then transcends into another realm.

She awakes amongst a rolling fog, as it clears she heeds an immense object,
Wiping her eyes, she starts afoot and discerns a large book standing erect.

The cover presented then creeks ajar, the yellowed pages adorn with dust,
Projecting light into the binding with an antique lantern that’s covered in rust.

Pages turn rapidly, fluttering as the outskirt of her dream fold over and billow,
Suddenly she awakes to realize that she’s been using the same book as a pillow.



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Date: May 8, 2019
Free Verse or Rhyme Poetry Contest - Picture #2
Sponsor: Eve Roper
Poem Type: Rhyme
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 6/7/2019 10:29:00 AM
Love the imagery and especially the last couplet. Thanks!
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Date: 6/6/2019 12:51:00 PM
Hello Briaune Brown, so nice to meet you. A book for a pillow! It is not soft. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 5/19/2019 3:48:00 AM
An enjoyable poem and an entertaining image to go with it, Briauna. Belated congrats on your fine win. Regards // paul
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/19/2019 1:57:00 PM
Thank you, Paul?
Date: 5/12/2019 5:58:00 PM
Cute! Congrats, Briauna!
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/14/2019 12:58:00 AM
I'm glad you think so! Thank you!
Date: 5/12/2019 1:51:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win, Briauna :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/14/2019 12:58:00 AM
Any time someone likes my work, that's a win in my book! Thank you!
Date: 5/11/2019 3:21:00 PM
Nice one Briauna, loved the rhyme and flow along with some great imagery. Keep spilling the ink!
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/13/2019 8:49:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 5/9/2019 1:51:00 PM
Keep writing, Briauna; keep entering these contests. You are doing GREAT!! (By way of comparison: I've been on the Soup since December, 2017, and I've won exactly one contest outright). Good luck Eve's contest with this 'page-turner.' ~ gw
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/14/2019 8:50:00 PM
Back with congrats and more encouragement, Briauna. Keep going for it. Wonderful. ~ Gershon
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/9/2019 3:17:00 PM
I love writing and the contests help me through writer's block! Thank you for your kind words and encouragement!
Date: 5/9/2019 9:52:00 AM
lol. Excellent
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/9/2019 3:15:00 PM
lol. Thanks
Date: 5/8/2019 6:46:00 PM
A refreshingly intriguingly different poem, the type I like . Good luck in the contest, though I'm sure you have a winner here already.....Maria
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