Pillow Book

In the library, we meet a young lady; her study, it does overwhelm,
Resting, laying her head down, she then transcends into another realm.

She awakes amongst a rolling fog, as it clears she heeds an immense object,
Wiping her eyes, she starts afoot and discerns a large book standing erect.

The cover presented then creeks ajar, the yellowed pages adorn with dust,
Projecting light into the binding with an antique lantern that’s covered in rust.

Pages turn rapidly, fluttering as the outskirt of her dream fold over and billow,
Suddenly she awakes to realize that she’s been using the same book as a pillow.



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Date: May 8, 2019
Free Verse or Rhyme Poetry Contest - Picture #2
Sponsor: Eve Roper
Poem Type: Rhyme
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Mcgee Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 10:29 AM
Love the imagery and especially the last couplet. Thanks!
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 6, 2019 at 12:51 PM
Hello Briaune Brown, so nice to meet you. A book for a pillow! It is not soft. Have a nice day my friend.
Callus Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 3:48 AM
An enjoyable poem and an entertaining image to go with it, Briauna. Belated congrats on your fine win. Regards // paul
Brown Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 1:57 PM
Thank you, Paul?
Rodrigues Avatar
May 12, 2019 at 5:58 PM
Cute! Congrats, Briauna!
Brown Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 12:58 AM
I'm glad you think so! Thank you!
Andresen Avatar
May 12, 2019 at 1:51 PM
- Congratulations on your win, Briauna :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Brown Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 12:58 AM
Any time someone likes my work, that's a win in my book! Thank you!
Mcconnell Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 3:21 PM
Nice one Briauna, loved the rhyme and flow along with some great imagery. Keep spilling the ink!
Brown Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 8:49 PM
Thank you!
Wolf Avatar
May 9, 2019 at 1:51 PM
Keep writing, Briauna; keep entering these contests. You are doing GREAT!! (By way of comparison: I've been on the Soup since December, 2017, and I've won exactly one contest outright). Good luck Eve's contest with this 'page-turner.' ~ gw
Wolf Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 8:50 PM
Back with congrats and more encouragement, Briauna. Keep going for it. Wonderful. ~ Gershon
Brown Avatar
May 9, 2019 at 3:17 PM
I love writing and the contests help me through writer's block! Thank you for your kind words and encouragement!
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
May 9, 2019 at 9:52 AM
lol. Excellent
Brown Avatar
May 9, 2019 at 3:15 PM
lol. Thanks
Williams Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 6:46 PM
A refreshingly intriguingly different poem, the type I like . Good luck in the contest, though I'm sure you have a winner here already.....Maria
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