Pillars of Communication

hanging bridge
                                             pillars at the end
                                              must be strong
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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October 7, 2014 at 4:21 PM
WOW, this is my favorite poem so far, besides the birthday dedication poems. This is something, I can relate too. Sometimes one can't back... A favorite senryu, and the first at that. Hope you are well, my BF.... LINDA
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October 8, 2014 at 10:52 AM
Yes, it's. Though not declared. You have rightly caught, my *friend. Thanks for your comment always,bl
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October 7, 2014 at 2:24 PM
You say so much in these three lines, BL. There is always a "hanging bridge" between two people as they attempt to communicate. The desire to understand each other's point of view is the pillar that needs to be strong. A favorite for me, BL. Love, carolyn
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October 7, 2014 at 2:30 PM
Many thanks my lovely friend for your lovely comment. Rightly caught my point of view. It's for world too. Thanks a lot again for making this poem your favorite. Loved always,bl
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