Pill of Life

Forcing me to hallucinate an unrealistic fate,
This life of mine does make me play,games I love to hate.
Die I may if I don't play,and sit with tears in eyes,
win,I do, to see the day at the cost of others' cries.
Some may win and some may lose, like gluttons we eat through dreams,
to do what he wants to,a rich may chose,the rest ignored downstream's.
Never can we pursue our likes,our dislikes we may follow 
what we want to be,we don't,and life just makes us hollow.
empty within with dreams all drained,in the kitchen of a fantasy butcher,
posing as reality of life,forcing us to usher.
why my dreams are censored and cut,and mould to other's needs,
to do what I want and be what I be, these thoughts all plucked like weeds.
If Pill of Life be a personified lady, I would beg "O Miss,
take me from dream butchers to a land of eternal bliss."



Contest name - PILL OF LIFE
date-16th Feb,2013. Saturday.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 6/26/2013 3:48:00 PM
You are really skilled as a poet. I would like to see more of your work... Jake
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Date: 6/25/2013 6:25:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this one again. Have a good night.
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Adarsh Raj
Date: 6/25/2013 10:59:00 PM
Thanks again sir,Good night....
Date: 6/24/2013 1:57:00 AM
I love the true nature of your poem. Very brilliantly written. Congrats Adarsh. AO
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Adarsh Raj
Date: 6/25/2013 11:01:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 6/22/2013 10:14:00 PM
Excellent. Great work. Congrats . Tfs
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Adarsh Raj
Date: 6/25/2013 11:02:00 PM
Thank you sir...
Date: 2/27/2013 1:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win...David
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Date: 2/26/2013 2:18:00 PM
Adarsh, a nice winning poem..thank you for sharing..LINDA
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Date: 2/26/2013 11:07:00 PM
thank you Linda :)
Date: 2/25/2013 1:36:00 PM
Great winning work..Congrats on your good job..Sara
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Date: 2/26/2013 4:23:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 2/24/2013 10:23:00 AM
Many congratulations Adarsh xx
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Adarsh Raj
Date: 2/26/2013 4:21:00 AM
Thanks a lot sir.
Date: 2/22/2013 3:27:00 PM
Good job on this poem, I like it.
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Date: 2/21/2013 5:22:00 PM
Such sadness, I hope you are brought to a realization of happy dreams far beyond current perspectives and sadned imaginations. You are articulate and no one here will limit your pen or expression. You have much to look forward too. Fly little bird, fly!
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Adarsh Raj
Date: 2/23/2013 11:34:00 AM
thank you sir.
Date: 2/15/2013 6:47:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, if you need any help don't hesitate to ask. Light & Love
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Date: 2/23/2013 11:35:00 AM
thanks a lot ma'am.
Date: 2/13/2013 12:12:00 PM
This is one of the best poems I've read for the contest...good luck
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Date: 2/23/2013 11:36:00 AM
wow, i never knew i wrote so good, thank you ma'am.
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