Pill For Life Before Death

When I'd be on my death bed,end of this race,
I'll take the pill to restore life on my face
To make me stronger so I can try
Bonding with my family one last time before I die. 
So that i can recall all memorable incidents one by one
Which will be told for many generations to come.
So that I could tell my grandchildren that I'll be in heaven,
Watching over them always,24x7.
So that I could hold my kids' hands with a grip which is still,
And encourage them to forever keep a strong will.
So that I can kiss and ensure my other half will be fine,
To say he'll find me with him at any point of time.
Only then the pill release me so that unspoken words don't give pain
From this life that is once and never will be again..

For the contest 'Pill Of Life'
1/24/2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Williams Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 1:07 PM
Congratulations on your win...David
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February 25, 2013 at 9:21 AM
a nice little win..pd
Guzzi Avatar
February 24, 2013 at 6:18 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Gildersleeve Avatar
February 24, 2013 at 1:15 PM
Congrats on your big win. Wonderfully written. Warm Smiles, Connie
Kendrick Avatar
February 24, 2013 at 12:45 PM
Great winning work..Congrats..Sara
Jerden Avatar
February 24, 2013 at 11:28 AM
Congratulations, Sadaf! Cheers, Roy
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 24, 2013 at 10:01 AM
Many congratulations sadaf xx
Jones Avatar
February 23, 2013 at 10:09 PM
Beautiful poem. Congratulations
Richards Avatar
February 23, 2013 at 8:29 PM
Such meaningful sentiments......a testimony to how much you love your children. So tenderly said!
Roberts Avatar
February 23, 2013 at 7:34 PM
Congratulations Sadaf, enjoyed your words ....Seren
Dietrich Avatar
February 23, 2013 at 6:54 PM
this is wonderful , Sadaf. and original. Congrats on your top place.
Andresen Avatar
January 28, 2013 at 11:06 AM
A powerful poem for the contest, Sadaf ! :) - Very well done, good luck ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Liwayway Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 5:06 AM
a very awesome write friend Sadaf. I like your poem. Good luck in the contest. :) Maria
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