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Pill For Life Before Death

When I'd be on my death bed,end of this race, I'll take the pill to restore life on my face To make me stronger so I can try Bonding with my family one last time before I die. So that i can recall all memorable incidents one by one Which will be told for many generations to come. So that I could tell my grandchildren that I'll be in heaven, Watching over them always,24x7. So that I could hold my kids' hands with a grip which is still, And encourage them to forever keep a strong will. So that I can kiss and ensure my other half will be fine, To say he'll find me with him at any point of time. Only then the pill release me so that unspoken words don't give pain From this life that is once and never will be again.. For the contest 'Pill Of Life' 1/24/2013

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Date: 2/27/2013 1:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win...David
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Date: 2/25/2013 9:21:00 AM
a nice little win..pd
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Date: 2/24/2013 6:18:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 2/24/2013 1:15:00 PM
Congrats on your big win. Wonderfully written. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 2/24/2013 12:45:00 PM
Great winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 2/24/2013 11:28:00 AM
Congratulations, Sadaf! Cheers, Roy
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Date: 2/24/2013 10:01:00 AM
Many congratulations sadaf xx
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Date: 2/23/2013 10:09:00 PM
Beautiful poem. Congratulations
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Date: 2/23/2013 8:29:00 PM
Such meaningful sentiments......a testimony to how much you love your children. So tenderly said!
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Date: 2/23/2013 7:34:00 PM
Congratulations Sadaf, enjoyed your words ....Seren
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Date: 2/23/2013 6:54:00 PM
this is wonderful , Sadaf. and original. Congrats on your top place.
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Date: 1/28/2013 11:06:00 AM
A powerful poem for the contest, Sadaf ! :) - Very well done, good luck ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/24/2013 5:06:00 AM
a very awesome write friend Sadaf. I like your poem. Good luck in the contest. :) Maria
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