Piles of Joy

Rapt, in wreaths of wool
stand before October wind,
wait for vermillion
leaves to fall once again as
we jump in with joyful glee!

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John Heck

Date: 10/18/2008 10:10:00 AM

Congratulations Sue on your win in Kristin's contest! I love the Fall season and this Tanka captured it beautifully. Peace always, John

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/13/2008 4:12:00 PM

I loved this...it makes me think of my grandkids jumping into the piles of leaves after all our work raking! :)...Carrie

Date: 10/12/2008 2:08:00 PM

I enjoyed the ecative nature of this poem. Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on your third place finish in Kristin's contest! Way to Go! Keep up the good writing. Karen

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/12/2008 10:00:00 AM

Congratulations dear Sue on your Third Place win in Kristin's contest! YAY for YOU! Excellent and well deserved! Love, Shar xoxo

Heidie Buys

Date: 9/19/2008 2:03:00 PM

Love the title and you capture the fun of the season with a smile. I really enjoyed. Good to have you back. Love Heidie

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 9/19/2008 1:49:00 PM

Sue, Your poem Piles of joy captures the advent of autumn beautifully. It makes one feel sharing that joyful glee. Thanks for your encouraging comments on my poem The Autumn of life.

Sharon Winter

Date: 9/18/2008 6:08:00 PM

This makes want to jump into a pile of leaves and shout YAY! It is so the season, captured so well! Super duper great Tanka! Love, Shar

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