Pilate's River

SUGAR SWEET MY LITTLE BROTHER YOU ARE--CHARMA

Smile~This must be for the love of Your life, and, what a wonderful gift from above this is!!!:):)~Sometimes one can write something so seemingly simple, yet so very profound!!?:):)~Wonderful Jeremiah~Just as Your heart, and "The Light In Your Eyes"~Again, "My Love & Warmth Always, To You & Your Loves, Forever, John!!"~See You Tomorrow My Dear Blessed Friend!!!:):) Bye ~

Jeremiah, Oh the famous poem so often paraphrased to send love. "Roses are red. Violets are blue, Sugar is Sweet and so are you." Many, like you, have varied & used those lines for generations. So welcome to that love poem's fan club. You drew us in, my friend. Nice job on a common ditty about an eternal theme. Okay, I have to do it... a last line idea. "And, love grew a new." Hum, this one might be better than the original. Just having fun here. So, thank you kindly. Lovingly, Dane

Cute thought. However not all roses are red and not all violets are blue, but these are common and known lines. To make it a little different and rhyme all the lines, might I suggest: "Roses full bloom Violets cool blue I found you And I fell in love with you!" Also I want to thank you for your review and comments on my poem. Caroline.

SWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEETTTTTTTTTTTTTT-SUGARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR---SWEETTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT----CHARMA

Wonderful title...very sweet my friend..I hope the love bloom eternally.