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a young professor doing research my grasp of truth was quick to form and i began my earnest search for a one-horned unicorn so i put on a yellow slicker and i went out in the storm but the weather got much thicker and i missed the unicorn it was like reaching for a rose and finding a cutting thorn i cried and blew my streaming nose and missed my unicorn then a cat in striped pajamas his outfit so elegantly worn said look in the Bahamas you'll find your unicorn i no longer care a fig and I'm no longer forlorn because i've seen a swimming pig i don't need a unicorn

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Date: 3/23/2025 8:21:00 PM
Hilarious. Great stuff, David. Thoroughly enjoyed. Thanks, Gershon
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David Crandall
Date: 3/23/2025 8:39:00 PM
Thanks Gershon!
Date: 3/23/2025 2:59:00 PM
very witty David! hugs Jan xx
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David Crandall
Date: 3/23/2025 8:39:00 PM
Thanks Jan!
Date: 3/23/2025 12:52:00 PM
- Who needs a unicorn when you have a swimming pig ... an amusing poem, David :) - hugs
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David Crandall
Date: 3/23/2025 12:57:00 PM
true, these pigs are pretty cute, thanks Anne-Lise!
Date: 3/23/2025 11:52:00 AM
Who’d have thought that pigs could swim, perhaps it’s their way of keeping trim, and avoiding the roasting tin. Enjoyed the humour… Beryl
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David Crandall
Date: 3/23/2025 12:56:00 PM
haha, could be! thanks Beryl!

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