Pies and Seduction

I love the way you stare at fruit pies
that I bring you; your eyes glow
with anticipation, as you lick your lips.

I love the way you eat the fruit pies;
oooooouuuuu.........you say, drowned
in their flavor and sweetness. 

I love the way you act after eating the fruit pies;
licking what remained of the pie from your fingers,
as you stare at me with bedroom eyes.....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mehta Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 10:23 AM
Ni cely done piece, congrats on the win
Kimathi Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 10:41 PM
Thank you Dr. Ram Mehta! :-)
Allison Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 2:36 PM
ooh this is a tempting seductive write - congrats teddy:-) Hugs jan xxx
Kimathi Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 10:00 AM
Thank you for enjoying and applauding my work Jan! ^_^
Lamoureux Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 1:14 PM
Congratulations on your win.
Kimathi Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 9:59 AM
Thank you very much Richard! :-)
Harper Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 12:11 PM
Teddy, naughty seduction, those pies! Thanks for entering the pie contest, truly wonderful submissions sent in.
Kimathi Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 9:59 AM
Lol. Thank you for your applause Sheri! ^_^ True, those pies had something good!
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