Piercing the veil

We notice space flicker, signalling that we can penetrate the veil of emptiness, by softening attention, in a stillness continuum, animated by our pure intent, to awaken within this lucid dream. Gently laying to rest, labours of mind, by shifting from thinking to feeling, poised in awareness unblinking, putting on pause flow of time, without employing force, we get to the source, amazed to see no less than face of God.
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Goldsmith Avatar
April 19, 2025 at 11:07 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Piercing the veil" write. Happy Easter... Have a blessed day with your win.......
mysore Avatar
April 18, 2025 at 3:50 AM
you make life and living seem so easy, only chosen few get to the source, how beautifully you write blessed one! Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
Seeker Avatar
April 18, 2025 at 8:03 AM
thank you, TCM. internalising attention, prioritising silence is a choice. most do not so choose since they are afraid to let go of desires.
Empress Avatar
April 17, 2025 at 12:43 PM
Dear Seeker, I absolutely loved the title, and the depth of what youv conveyed here in such a soulful manner really. How youv touched mindfulness, and stillness and how youv phrased lines as always is just beyond inspiring and uplifting, and soothing to the soul too, i especially love "to awaken within this lucid dream." "shifting from thinking to feeling," reading this makes me want to pause, inhale and just embrace the moment! Impeccable as always! Thank you for joining! Congratulations on your top win. Sending you light always! A fave
Seeker Avatar
April 17, 2025 at 8:27 PM
Delighted these words resonate in your glowing heart, IE dear. Thank you for the placement and for hosting.
Narain Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 10:49 AM
Nice poem.
Seeker Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 6:42 PM
Thank you, Jay
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