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Piercing the veil Premiere Contest Winner

as silence layers silence in time dissolved staid stillness we sense ripples in the void wherein our soul is centred simply present in agendaless vibrance attentive and receptive not only to the words but meanings assigned by murmurs of heart translated by the mind a symbolic representation of light as it is imbibed and assimilated osmotically by our formless presence as a soundless reverberation sublime whose refrains echo in the cave of our heart wherefrom gushing forth the bardo that may not be named is then pierced gently and mindfully imprinting our love on the heart of God thus invoking grace by blurring all boundaries and ending separation

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Date: 7/5/2024 2:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win, Dear Seeker! Amazing poem with profound thoughts - a winner for sure!
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Date: 7/5/2024 6:24:00 PM
Thank you, Mala :)
Date: 7/5/2024 2:36:00 AM
Awesomeness. Congrats on your top win. God bless you, love, Gina
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Date: 7/5/2024 7:54:00 AM
Thank you dear Gina, God bless
Date: 7/5/2024 1:53:00 AM
Amazing dear poet. So cool to see you win the difficult trophy. Congratulations. Happy writing.
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Date: 7/5/2024 7:54:00 AM
Thank you, TCM dear
Date: 7/5/2024 12:20:00 AM
Congrats on your top win! a lovely write that makes me feel your thoughts!
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Date: 7/5/2024 12:48:00 AM
Thank you, Krish, I’m happy these words resonate
Date: 7/5/2024 12:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your trophy win, Seeker. ‘the bardo that may not be named’ – a mysterious and enigmatic concept. It reminds me of the liminal spaces between existence and non-existence, where souls wander, seeking enlightenment or rebirth. Sharing this (personal) philosophy was an excellent choice for the contest entry – the content is thought-provoking. Each reader will find their own truth amongst the words …
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Suzette Richards
Date: 7/5/2024 3:49:00 AM
It underlines the value of writing from the heart and personal knowledge -- not to overthink it.
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Date: 7/5/2024 12:50:00 AM
Thank you, Suzette ~ this was unexpected! To be honest, this was a one breath write. I am happy you found this poem worthy of placement.
Date: 6/6/2024 9:34:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this one. Have a wonderful day......................
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Date: 6/6/2024 5:01:00 PM
Thank you, Paula dear. Have a great weekend ahead

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