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Chiquitachiamaka Baity

Piercing Pain

Pain
pierces
so deeply
wounding the soul
Leaving scars inflected by deception
Hurling it’s arrows of deceitfulness
Puncturing peace
Impaling
The heart's
Bliss

Copyright © Chiquitachiamaka Baity | Year Posted 2011

lost lovetetractys

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Andrea Dietrich

September 27, 2011 at 12:26 AM

You do your tetractys really well!!

Richard Pickett

September 9, 2011 at 12:56 PM

Deceit is such an ugly thing...Well written...God Bless...Taz

Elizabeth Wesley

September 4, 2011 at 7:44 PM

As you say, there can be no happiness with decepetion. You say it well with this insightful verse.

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 2, 2011 at 10:11 AM

Your poetry is always a pleasure to read no matter what you are writing about Chiquita. Enjoy your weekend and keep your pen flowing. Love, Carol

September 1, 2011 at 7:31 PM

sad but lovely.nice poem.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 1, 2011 at 3:36 PM

wow Chiquita a strong message from this tender write luv.. pain is so hurtful ..so damaging.. but luv can restore in time... awesome piece..

September 1, 2011 at 3:34 PM

ah a soulful write indeed, top notch as always.

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