Piercing Pain

Pain pierces so deeply wounding the soul Leaving scars inflected by deception Hurling it’s arrows of deceitfulness Puncturing peace Impaling The heart's Bliss

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2011 12:26:00 AM

You do your tetractys really well!!

Richard Pickett

Date: 9/9/2011 12:56:00 PM

Deceit is such an ugly thing...Well written...God Bless...Taz

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/4/2011 7:44:00 PM

As you say, there can be no happiness with decepetion. You say it well with this insightful verse.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/2/2011 10:11:00 AM

Your poetry is always a pleasure to read no matter what you are writing about Chiquita. Enjoy your weekend and keep your pen flowing. Love, Carol

Wole Francis

Date: 9/1/2011 7:31:00 PM

sad but lovely.nice poem.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/1/2011 3:36:00 PM

wow Chiquita a strong message from this tender write luv.. pain is so hurtful ..so damaging.. but luv can restore in time... awesome piece..

Steven Cooke

Date: 9/1/2011 3:34:00 PM

ah a soulful write indeed, top notch as always.