Pierced

You see through my uneasiness
My ego deflated by your gaze
Who could survive the blaze
Of fire that gushes out..
set to devour.
Ashes
Dust
Light
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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March 28, 2016 at 3:54 PM
A 7 and a favorite... excellent composition with outstanding phrasing and stark imagery. BRAVO Aida! Best wishes, Keith
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