Pieces

love like currency that changes hands, that falls into cracks between the pavement, protected by some, squandered by others, unspent, overdrawn, overwhelmed

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Tiaua M Ioane

Date: 3/12/2014 1:11:00 AM

Great piece, short and deep! Keep writing I will visit you again. Thanks for sharing. Tiaua.

Skat A

Date: 3/11/2014 9:37:00 AM

S.L., , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 3/11/2014 8:14:00 AM

Awesome verse!!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/11/2014 6:54:00 AM

nice verse, SL, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/11/2014 4:13:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,S.L. :) - I choose your first nice written free verse - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1 Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)