Pieces

If to have given
a fragment of me to you
a piece for us both
to build a life’s foundation,
then who indeed to tempt fate.

© Harry J Horsman 2013

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Debbie Duncan

March 31, 2013 at 12:10 AM

nice one harry, you have a blessed Easter Sunday ;}

Sukmawati Komala

March 25, 2013 at 9:44 AM

so lovely <3 very well penned my dear friend <3 :) much luv :) Sk

James Marshall Goff

March 24, 2013 at 6:46 AM

Honest...contemplative...jimbo

Lucilla Carrillo

March 23, 2013 at 6:53 PM

Wow! Harry This is like a diamond in the rough. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Andrea Dietrich

March 23, 2013 at 12:34 AM

Love this one on the theme of pieces! And so good to see three in a row from you today.

Richard Lamoureux

March 23, 2013 at 12:32 AM

Your romantic side is showing. Well done

Audrey Haick

March 22, 2013 at 7:51 PM

Profound! Deep Tanka, Harry. Always, Annalise

Donna Jones

March 22, 2013 at 6:57 PM

No one would dare! Not fate herself....

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

March 22, 2013 at 3:23 PM

Hi there just come back to this, i commented on it earlier but I see it's not there now,I must be losing it... I said ... 'who indeed' some temptations are so hard to resist xx