Pieces

Pieces – Broken dreams injected into the soul of a loveless man, blown apart dejectedly
Entered into Black Eyed Susan's "Pieces" contest 3/5/2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Martin Avatar
March 25, 2013 at 8:46 PM
I like the action in this poem. I could really feel 'blown apart'. Those are hard hitting words. Good job
A   Avatar
March 16, 2013 at 12:34 PM
Russell, this is a nice winning poem... many congrats on this wonder piece of piece.. ;-) always~ PD
Johnson Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 7:34 PM
How very sad. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Jones Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 4:11 PM
Congratulations Russell...great job..
Guzzi Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 2:45 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Gildersleeve Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 2:28 PM
Congratulation Russell on your win. Nicely done. Warm Smiles, Connie
Jones Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 8:08 PM
Wow incredible....
Horne Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 10:11 AM
love this powerful write, Russell
Kendrick Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 7:36 AM
Reads like winner to me..Maybe if true new love will come through..Enjoyed reading the line..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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