Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs Poet Rhyme

Pieces

I'm falling to pieces and I don't know why
Sometimes I feel so low that I just sit and cry
I want so badly to get up but something's weighing me down
I try so hard to force a smile but all I can do is frown

I'm falling to pieces and I can't get it together
Sometimes I feel my life is full of grey and stormy weather
It's tough to keep my head to the sky
When each and every day I struggle to get by

My life might be in little bitty pieces right now
But piece by piece I'm gonna turn this thing around

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Jack Ellison October 20, 2013 at 1:07 PM Positive... always think positive my dear Gwen! Hugs, Jack xoxox Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs October 21, 2013 at 8:39 AM And a positive thinker I am Jack, much like yourself. :)

Wilma Neels October 7, 2013 at 6:42 AM An empowering end to this gem Gwen :) Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs October 7, 2013 at 11:01 AM Thanks Wilma

John Posey April 4, 2013 at 7:00 PM Gwen, I can tell you're a winner. I love the spirit in this poem..... Love you dearly..... Jake Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs May 27, 2013 at 9:02 AM Jake, thanks so much for your comments, they mean a great deal to me. as you know you are one of my favorite writers. Bless you.

Poet Destroyer A March 16, 2013 at 12:34 PM Gwen, this is a nice winning poem... many congrats on this wonder piece of piece.. ;-) always~ PD Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs March 17, 2013 at 9:27 AM Thanks, so glad you like it :)

Andrea Dietrich March 15, 2013 at 4:49 PM hey, I see you won in the contest too. GOOD one. And I really like how you used another idiomatic expression at the end of this one: piece by piece. Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs March 15, 2013 at 7:06 PM Thanks so much Andrea, I appreciate your feedback.

Joyce Johnson March 14, 2013 at 10:44 PM very well done. Congratulations. Love, Joyce Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs March 15, 2013 at 10:42 AM Thanks Joyce, I appreciate your comment.

Donna Jones March 14, 2013 at 4:09 PM Congrats Gwen :-) Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs March 15, 2013 at 10:43 AM Thanks Donna :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 14, 2013 at 10:22 AM Many congratulations Gwen xx Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs March 15, 2013 at 10:44 AM Thanks Mandy, I appreciate it.