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Picturesque

I smell the lushness; I smell green,
and what I see around me is a scene
where I’d expect to hear seclusion’s hush.
Instead, I hear the sound of water’s rush.
Sweet water’s rush, like nature’s symphony
is endlessly cascading lusciously!

So fresh I want to taste it on my tongue -
this endless stream of dewy diamonds flung
to rocks below, creating a white mist.
How many eons have these rocks been kissed
by virgin droplets of this waterfall?
I breathe serenity, soothed by it all.

Sept. 14, 2019 for Eve Roper's Picturesque Poetry Contest
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Blodgett Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 10:15 PM
What a beautiful poem of serenity. Lonna
La France Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 4:57 PM
Andrea congratulations on your win in the contest with this beautiful poem!
Mcgee Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 2:27 PM
Oh, Andrea. your words run so smoothly to paint a sweet picture. Congrats on your win.
Andresen Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 7:58 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful winning poem, Andrea :) - A truly amazing picture Eve chose :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gupta Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 6:57 AM
Lovely, Andrea ... Indeed a picturesque poem ... Congratulations on your wonderful win ...
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 11:58 PM
Another First Placement for you Andrea, with this gorgeous entry! Congratulations my friend! : ) xxoo
Ligon Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 11:46 PM
Congrats on your serene picturesque poem. You incorporated sound, smell, taste, sight, and touch!
Roper Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 10:57 PM
Love your imagery and the emotions, Andrea, congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve
Walker Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 7:25 PM
Beautiful serene imagery, love, love, love it.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 21, 2019 at 10:27 PM
I see what you mean, we both took our entries in a peaceful direction. This is lovely Andrea. Best wishes for a high placement with this beauty! : ) xxoo
Krutsinger Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 6:30 AM
"How many eons have these rocks been kissed by virgin droptlets of this waterfall?" A glorious part. Soup mail Andrea.
Laurie Avatar
September 17, 2019 at 7:35 PM
Hello Andrea … cascading water in pristine forest; where else would we want to be. Nice picture verse Andrea - Lindsay
Mcintosh Avatar
September 16, 2019 at 1:31 AM
Love this... It's sure to do well in the contest. Many prayers and blessings.. and happy writing
Rodrigues Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 7:44 PM
So fresh I want to taste it on my tongue/this endless stream of dewy diamonds flung...love it!
Godwin Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 6:28 PM
This poem would not exist were it not for the contest so I give thanks to each star in the galaxy that Eve prompted this lush poem of splendidly titillating imagery! I love this one absolutely ...CayCay
Pandit Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 5:51 PM
Serene..and beautiful, Andrea--just like the photo it depicts--I enjoyed the read.
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