Pictures of You

Pictures of our past, swirl gently within 
my conscious mind, some make me grin,
adventures we had,  when young and joyous 
our loves, our gains, things that did annoy us,

memories connect to our favourite songs
heartache when people have done us wrongs
pleasurable times, wonderful views and sights,
sunrise, sunsets, seem to make things right,

you make the sun shine bright on a dull day,
you are the light that-shows me the way,
You make me feel better when feeling ill,
You are the one I want my heart to fill,

One single red rose bud you gave to me
On that so special day by the willow tree,
sweet aroma of fresh cut meadow grass, 
feelings of love we hope would never pass,

country walks getting caught in a storm
no fears you were there to keep me warm,
floating dreamily like a damsel butterfly 
in warm summer air, tears of joy in my eye,


you make the sun shine bright on a dull day
you are the light that-shows me the way
you make me feel better when feeling ill,
You are the one I want my heart to fill.

I see you every sunset and every sunrise
You'd turn up unannounced, a lovely surprise,
though now my heart is longing for thee
your so far away, I rely on pictures you see,

pictures of you in colour or black and white
perusing your image every day and night,
a vast ocean parts us now perhaps forever
but no ocean or sea can our memories sever,

you make the sun shine bright on a dull day,
you are the light that-shows me the way,
You make me feel better when feeling ill,
You are the one I want my heart to fill,







Composed 23/01/2017
Contest sponsored by Mystic Rose.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 1/30/2017 7:29:00 AM
Very nice Lyric. I can feel this one and see the images. I play keyboard, with some songs I write, but haven't lately. Keep up the good writing :)
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Roy Pett
Date: 1/30/2017 2:07:00 PM
Thank you very much Heidi, as you have probably guessed I'm on a learning curve regarding creative writing and comments from accomplished poets as you are very encouraging, thanks again, Roy
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Roy Pett
Date: 1/30/2017 11:10:00 AM
Thank you very much Heidi, as you have probably guessed I'm on a learning curve regarding creative writing and comments from accomplished poets as you are very encouraging, thanks again, Roy
Date: 1/25/2017 5:36:00 AM
A lovely song...I was imagining it with a melody. : ) 7
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Date: 1/25/2017 9:15:00 AM
Thank you very much Connie for your very kind comment, I wouldn't know where to start to put music to lyrics, thanks again Roy.
Date: 1/23/2017 3:35:00 PM
So beautiful.
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Date: 1/23/2017 3:41:00 PM
Thank you very much Elisabeth your very kind.
Date: 1/23/2017 2:15:00 PM
- A long poem Roy, but it feels like it could go even further because of its beauty - a marvel poems - A winning poem in my eyes (7) ... good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/23/2017 2:43:00 PM
You are very kind Anne-Lise, so pleased with your comment, made my day thank you very much, Roy.
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