Heidi Sands Poet Fibonacci

Pictures In My Mind

Just 
                                                     I
                                                Float on
                                               The River
                                            Along the shoreline
                                       As the birds seem to follow me
                        Flying tree to tree, they are full of life, happily
My journey is just a restful one, a day in the life of nature, fresh air and the      sunshine
I float in the precious moment that passes by with these sights like treasures to find, painting pictures to hang, with thoughts in my mind

Heidi Sands

9/22/17

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Bette Bavington September 23, 2017 at 7:50 AM Unique. Thought provoking. Reminds one of vacations where travels to nature have been serene and calm. Heidi Sands September 23, 2017 at 10:48 AM Thank you Bette. I am happy to hear your comment :)

Roy Pett September 23, 2017 at 4:30 AM Brilliant Heidi, beautiful imagery that takes the reader to this place of serenity, great Fibonacci, so clever up to 31 syllables. absolutely a Favourite. Heidi Sands September 23, 2017 at 10:47 AM Hi Roy. Thank you for your kind feedback on this one and considering it a favorite :)

Freddie Robinson Jr. September 22, 2017 at 4:18 PM This poem is so meditatively peaceful, Heidi. I could visualize myself their w/you. That is the sign of a true poet. Wonderful poem! Love and hug always. Heidi Sands September 22, 2017 at 4:19 PM Thanks so much Freddie. I love to reach the reader with scenes or feelings. I appreciate your comment :)

Joseph May September 22, 2017 at 3:33 PM Nicely penned Heidi..best wishes Heidi Sands September 22, 2017 at 3:37 PM Thank you Joseph :)

Vijay Pandit September 22, 2017 at 3:27 PM Lovely pictures--lovely restful day by the shoreline! Heidi Sands September 22, 2017 at 3:37 PM Thank you Vijay :)