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Pictures In My Mind

Just I Float on The River Along the shoreline As the birds seem to follow me Flying tree to tree, they are full of life, happily My journey is just a restful one, a day in the life of nature, fresh air and the sunshine I float in the precious moment that passes by with these sights like treasures to find, painting pictures to hang, with thoughts in my mind Heidi Sands 9/22/17

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Bette Bavington

Date: 9/23/2017 7:50:00 AM

Unique. Thought provoking. Reminds one of vacations where travels to nature have been serene and calm.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/23/2017 10:48:00 AM

Thank you Bette. I am happy to hear your comment :)

Roy Pett

Date: 9/23/2017 4:30:00 AM

Brilliant Heidi, beautiful imagery that takes the reader to this place of serenity, great Fibonacci, so clever up to 31 syllables. absolutely a Favourite.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/23/2017 10:47:00 AM

Hi Roy. Thank you for your kind feedback on this one and considering it a favorite :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 9/22/2017 4:18:00 PM

This poem is so meditatively peaceful, Heidi. I could visualize myself their w/you. That is the sign of a true poet. Wonderful poem! Love and hug always.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/22/2017 4:19:00 PM

Thanks so much Freddie. I love to reach the reader with scenes or feelings. I appreciate your comment :)

Joseph May

Date: 9/22/2017 3:33:00 PM

Nicely penned Heidi..best wishes

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/22/2017 3:37:00 PM

Thank you Joseph :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/22/2017 3:27:00 PM

Lovely pictures--lovely restful day by the shoreline!

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/22/2017 3:37:00 PM

Thank you Vijay :)