Pictured a Freed Verse

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THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FREED VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respondents thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment

PICTURED
apparently
in sombre
retreat
 the
literary
affirming
&
celebrates
the
  portraiture
with
some overlap
 to compare
perhaps
 contrast
&
reflect
the
sensibility
 of
 space
 with the
representative
&
extraordinary
captured
with
intimate detail
of
the
 slight &
spectacular
 character
 in retrospect

a
 cherished
collaboration
is with
the extraordinary
in
 a unique moment
of a
 moving experiences
of
transformation
meets the gaze
of memory
 of vulnerability
using traditional
cultural
 face to face
in
conversation

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