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Picture This- Symbol of Hope

Hey! You free spirits!
You are so blessed!
Unlike me!

It's too tough
to stifle our emotions
inside a closed space.

Because it whirls round us
again and again
like the leaves swirl

But you the free spirits
swerve everywhere
as there's no limit

Oh, the free spirits
I envy you
You are so blessed!
Unlike me

Hey darling
few days before
we were you

we are your alumnus
we were there
tolerated the torments

Now we are free spirits
Trust, believe and be patient
Miracles do happen in your life


Mar-30-2018

For the contest Picture this by Joseph May
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Line Gauthier

April 11, 2018 at 9:57 PM

Congrats on you fine placement, Supraja.

Artsieladie Sharon Donnelly

April 3, 2018 at 7:01 AM

Supraja, two perspectives rolled in one, very creative and well done. :) Congrats! ~ Artsie

Susan Gentry

April 1, 2018 at 10:47 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your interpretation of this pic.

Demetrios Trifiatis

April 1, 2018 at 2:20 PM

That is a refreshing writing dear, Supraja, no surprise it was a winner! Congratulations

Heidi Sands

April 1, 2018 at 9:19 AM

Congratulations for your win Supraja :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 1, 2018 at 8:44 AM

Wonderful uplifting write! Congratulations on your win :) xomo!

Supraja Kannan

April 2, 2018 at 1:37 AM

Thank you so much....Glad you liked it...

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 1, 2018 at 8:27 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, Supraja :) - Enjoy the last days of Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Supraja Kannan

April 2, 2018 at 1:36 AM

Thank you so much Anne... Happy Easter...

Vijay Pandit

April 1, 2018 at 7:57 AM

Congrats Supraja on your win--I thought your poem was uniquely special!

Supraja Kannan

April 2, 2018 at 1:34 AM

Thank you so much Vijay... Thanks for the congratulations and the kind words...

Joseph May

April 1, 2018 at 6:56 AM

The sky is the limit!...a lovely entry Supraja...Congrats on your win..

Supraja Kannan

April 2, 2018 at 1:34 AM

Wow... Thank you so much for the placement ... So glad you liked it...

Andrea Dietrich

March 31, 2018 at 4:14 PM

Oh awesome where that picture led you. Being boxed in. You are making me have thoughts for another contest. One I need to work on. I hope this has inspired me to come up with something for that one!! Anyway, good luck in Joseph's contest. It sure was a fun challenge.

Supraja Kannan

April 1, 2018 at 12:10 AM

Thank you so much for stopping by Andrea.. Glad it inspired you... Happy Easter... Thanks for your continuous support...

Paul Callus

March 31, 2018 at 11:49 AM

Even without being able to see the picture chosen, I can still enjoy this 'free spirits' poem, Supraja. I find it very original. Regards // paul

Supraja Kannan

April 1, 2018 at 12:08 AM

Thank you so much paul... Since I am no premium member, I could not upload pics... But thank you so much for your support ... Happy Easter...

Susan Ashley

March 30, 2018 at 7:01 PM

Wow! Supraja, such a spectacular and creative poem.. A great take on the photo for the contest. I love the juxtaposition of both speakers in your lovely and compelling poem. Enchanting. Best wishes for a win!

Supraja Kannan

April 1, 2018 at 12:05 AM

Thank you so much Susan for your lovely comment... Glad you enjoyed it... Happy Easter...