Picture This

Picture this… Her 1st memory Backward Garfield underwear and a t-shirt A body beneath her completely bare Jerry curls in his hair Into his eyes she stared… Picture this… She jumps up as the front door opens Scurries into the bathroom Dark wood paneling all around her No light; everything is a blur A light fixture with a long string dangling Metal tip on the end hanging… Picture this… A hook latch on the door Clothes on the floor She can’t reach… stands on the bleach On her tippy toes Frightened as the wind blows She has to lock it; she must; but she froze… Picture this… She hears the voices The tap on the bathroom door She’s still trying… her body’s sore The door opens and she asks “Panties on backward?” “Why aren’t you dressed; this place is a mess?” She looks up; fear on her face Her heart continues to race... Picture this… In he walks in only boxer shorts "I told her she could get undressed.” “Hurry up and go clean up your mess.” She just stood there and didn’t say a word Her voice was never ever heard She was just 5 years old Her secret she never told... Lay

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Date: 1/25/2011 1:35:00 PM
simply beautiful, I wish I could write something like this It's so horrible and sadly I know that truth my father is a sad part of my life and my mother took his side, I am 16 and thats pretty my whole story of my life. So many voices go unheard, honestly thats why I write these words. Simply beautiful isn't enough to explain...this poem and a fathers lust. I wish you well on your future writes, I will never forget this sight. ~Nikkole.~
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Date: 12/14/2010 7:39:00 AM
How sad that children suffer such abuse. You told the story in a way that touches our heartstrings, Lay. I can't even imagine this happening. Guess I was lucky to have such a loving father. Peace and blessings, Carolyn
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