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Picture Postcard The air sighed heavily as Winter rested its head on soft somber clouds lightened earlier by a sifting of rain, snow and ice. It smiled softly at the moon which, once more, made a welcomed appearance in the mantle of night’s sky sprinkled lightly with stars. It shivered considerably near the trees in the cities wearing their crystal jackets, that glimmered slightly with moonbeams smile. It whispered quietly close to sleeping houses bedecked were pristine white hats, fringed along their sides with crystalline tassels. It applauded the sun as it soundlessly arose presenting to the world a postcard bejeweled with Winter’s muse. By: Debra Squyres 01/20/13

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Date: 3/8/2013 8:08:00 AM
lines five and six of the first stanza and lines two and three are completely out of sync with the rest of the poem. each line is a fragment sentence on its own expect for those two lines which is a whole sentence broken into two lines. othe then that it is a splendid poem
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Date: 1/30/2013 3:15:00 PM
Winter has it good side only when your looking out from inside. Deb a beautiful post card painting in words. Images of winter white. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 1/24/2013 1:25:00 PM
Debra what a excellent write. Winter has it's good side and its bad. It's bad is its tooooo Cooooold! I loved your poem. Warm, Warm S,lies, Connie
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Date: 1/21/2013 11:54:00 PM
wow, Debra, what a lovely poem using so much imagery and personification . One of your BEST.
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Date: 1/21/2013 8:40:00 PM
beautiful write Debra.....thanks for stopping by...
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Date: 1/21/2013 5:27:00 PM
What a picture you presented here, Debra. I can see it in my mind. It's breathtakingly beautiful! What an awesome job :) Love it.
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Date: 1/21/2013 3:56:00 PM
Yes I too think Winter has its own beauty and wouldn't want to loss it! Thanks for stopping by my writes! Light & Love
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Date: 1/21/2013 11:53:00 AM
This is not a normal post card Debra, it must have come falling down the basis of an angel's hand. - Gorgeous!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/21/2013 9:03:00 AM
wow talk about living every word Debra,, this is so good...
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Date: 1/21/2013 7:13:00 AM
Very descriptive and expressive work..I could almost see the scene..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments were uplifting..Sara
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Date: 1/20/2013 1:47:00 PM
You paint winter beautifully. The mornings truly are so beautiful.
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Date: 1/20/2013 8:12:00 AM
Winter can be extremely powerful and intrusive at the same time my friend! I really enjoyed reading this amazing and intriguing poem this morning! What an outstanding piece, such a lovely poem told in such a kind and free spirited way, Great Work!!
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Date: 1/20/2013 7:49:00 AM
And what a beauty it is ..xx
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