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Picture Perfect

I drew a smile across her face Though it was deceiving Painted her into a lovely place Me, myself believing Adorned her dress, exquisite details All of this for show Beneath my ink, her life derails No one will ever know

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/7/2020 3:46:00 PM
I have worn my share of painted on smiles. I love your work!
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Date: 10/6/2015 11:35:00 AM
Good stuff. Congrats, daver
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Date: 2/28/2015 7:23:00 PM
So nice to read your verse this evening. Light & Love
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Anna Hopper
Date: 3/1/2015 2:04:00 PM
Thank you! I am glad that you enjoyed it!
Date: 2/28/2015 4:19:00 PM
Enjoyed this Anna something we all do is paint a picture we want all to believe. A 7 from me
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Anna Hopper
Date: 3/1/2015 2:05:00 PM
Thank you! It is nice to know that someone can read my poetry and know the point that I was trying to make!
Date: 2/28/2015 2:06:00 PM
Very nice pen Anna! enjoyed your piece dear friend. A 7 from me! Wishing you a very lovely weekend! In his light! God bless you! Love and hugs! :) xxx D.
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Anna Hopper
Date: 2/28/2015 2:14:00 PM
Thank you very much! May God bless you as well!

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