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Picture Perfect

"Stricken in heart over what might have been" Anxiety settles as stillness falls Quiet before the dusk slowly decends Gratitude for a picture perfect pause The doe's beauty within my line of sight Birds chirp in the deep forest unaware No danger from anyone; no need for flight Deep within the underbrush noises scare_ Tiny twin fawns disturb silence with bleats Waddlle over to mom for nourishment All settles to quiet as fawns milk eat Camera shutter never snapped event Picture perfect scene set ready to snap Gunfire rings out, camera drops, death entraps First line a quote from Mark's sonnet..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/5/2014 7:24:00 AM
very good Sara I like the build up very sad ending which shocks in its suddenness great pen I like it hugs
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Date: 2/2/2014 10:16:00 AM
sad ending, but lovely sonnet, my friend. Hope this will be a winner in Debbie's contest
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Date: 2/1/2014 4:11:00 PM
what a shocking end but a natural turn of events.
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Date: 1/31/2014 5:23:00 PM
This is a picture perfect write of yours my friend! This is quite a sad poem, but very wondrously written! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this evening! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 1/31/2014 11:00:00 AM
Your ability to say many things with few words stands this out: the pause, the silence,the readiness to snap and the shot. This is great Sara.
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Date: 1/31/2014 9:44:00 AM
I love how you lead me into your forest of feelings and beautiful sights. Great sonnet, Sara; enjoyed it very much :)
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