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A Violet by a moss stone, Half hidden from the eyes ! William Wordsworth (The Lost Love) _________________________ I am a girl a little bit Gothic and so ethereal, Within a folded rose I hide myself from the world; My ebony hair a veil to view the horror that I perceive, I peer beyond my velvet petals to find beauty. I cannot speak of my pain to those who care, Choosing to hide my feelings behind a crafted mask; And within my perfect rose I dream and dream and dream, My visions take me again and again to this place. Above a full moon dances with billowing clouds, The ornate gate creaks as I push it to enter again; A winding road engraved upon my mind beckons to me, I glide pass reaching gnarled trees. Angel statues do not comfort me from my sadness, The rows and rows of tombs an eternal maze of stone; In the misty cemetery I drift beautifully ethereal, Until I hear the first bird song. _____________________ August 17, 2013 Poetry/Verse/Picture Perfect Copyright Protected, ID 08-499-567-17 All Rights Reserved, 2013, Constance La France

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Date: 8/22/2013 9:09:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS !!! Picture awesome Perfect. LOVE ~SKAT~
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Date: 8/22/2013 8:07:00 PM
Amazing win Broken..congrats...LINDA
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Date: 8/22/2013 5:34:00 PM
awesome write, my friend. Congrats on your wins : )
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Date: 8/22/2013 3:23:00 PM
Like the first line of your poem, I find this to be "ethereal" writing. You do that kind so well, Constance. A beautifully painted picture. Congratulations on being in the top ten list!
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Date: 8/22/2013 3:05:00 PM
Hmm!very touchy...Great write,dear friend..Congrats on your win...
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Date: 8/22/2013 2:59:00 PM
From your very first postings......I have sensed the sadness that this poem says about you......I believe in the truth of each word you have shared here. I hope someday the world will be kinder and the sun in your life will shine brighter. Blessing to you and a hug as well !
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Date: 8/22/2013 12:26:00 PM
I like the mood you created, congratulations.
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