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Picture Perfect

(Gentle Summer Rain)

Listen to:
light pouring silver gray
enriched thoughts fall from the sky
complete path towards-
Blissful, Delighting Peace
small ceremonial rain dance.
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Gentle therapeutic rain
on a warm summer day.
falls of heaven on my skin 
lovely healing memory
smiling tears 
embracing promise land
means of escaping
utopia in a cloud
Solace-
light mist paints the Earth

"Drizzling summer rays."
Swimming in sunshine, rain.



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Michael Byte

Date: 2/3/2014 6:20:00 PM

:-)

Justin Bordner

Date: 1/31/2014 2:30:00 AM

Ah, loving life, for better or worse, having the strength to smile despite a curse, having the heart to embrace the thirst, the hunger for another first. I love the wisdom of your pen my dearest Poet. Your faithful Angel, Justin.

Paddi March

Date: 12/18/2013 1:45:00 PM

I love the feel of this poem, what wonders , quiet wonders, you show. I feel much like this over the fall of snow at night, Not a raging storm, but heavy soft wonder of it all. Curiously it also made me wonder why things need water, Where did that idea come from. what a poetic idea. Hmm for give the vaugeries of my mind. Lovely contemplative work. Thank you

Len Gasun

Date: 12/4/2013 12:46:00 AM

Hi again my dearest sis! Stopping by to read once more this very inspiring stellar poem of yours before I finally log off & go to my nxt class. Enjoying thoroughly again the very wonderful feelings and the very splendid & perfect image of this outstanding poem of my greatest & most fave poet. Thank you so much for sharing! Hope you're doing well my dearest sis & BFF. Sending u my love, smiles and sweetest hugs. God bless! More power & blessings always! Lovem4evr, Leonora

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/12/2013 5:10:00 PM

Sweet summer poem here! As the summer dies we can remeber bmoments lbe so weike the one you describe so well here. Peace & Love Matthew Anish p

Len Gasun

Date: 9/9/2013 8:58:00 PM

Hi, my dearest sis! Thank you so much again. I'm glad you appreciated the poem I wrote from the very beautiful lines in one of my favourite precious masterpieces of my only greatest poet, most fave, idol, loving sis and friend. Words aren't enough to thank you for everything. I adore so much that's why I chose yours. That was just a try. I hope I can write free verse soon which is one of my aspirations. Biggest sweet hugs & kisses! lovem4evr, Leonora

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/2/2013 4:16:00 PM

Awesome one! Always, Laura

Molly Montgomery

Date: 9/1/2013 2:51:00 PM

So beautiful and very therapeutic! Molly

Vinayak Pratap

Date: 8/27/2013 2:36:00 AM

nicely done gr8 work do judge my work

Joe Maverick

Date: 8/25/2013 2:06:00 PM

Enjoyable write you have provided PD thanks for your great comment..'

Anangsha Alammyan

Date: 8/25/2013 3:10:00 AM

Thank you so much for your encouragement :) I was going through some of your poems... really awesome work!!! :)

Tim Ryerson

Date: 8/24/2013 8:13:00 PM

Picture perfect for sure!...Also, I INSIST that you let me put these ice cubes down now...Even my little buddy is getting cold and he does NOT perform very well under such conditions...

Len Gasun

Date: 8/24/2013 7:58:00 PM

Hi, my dearest sis! Giving you another big sweetest hugs on another great win of yours with this stupendous write.. always perfect/ outstanding poem & picture as always & in everyway. Huge hearty congratulations again! It's always my great honor to read your poetry & you don't know how happy I am whenever I read it. Thank you, thank you so much for everything! I'm logging off for a while 'cuz I got an appointment w/ my doctor but I'll come back @ soup as soon as I'm done. Tcare always! lovemuch4ever, Leonora

Donna Jones

Date: 8/24/2013 6:32:00 PM

Congratulations on your perfect poem Linda...

Skat A

Date: 8/24/2013 5:11:00 PM

congrats all the way...SKAT

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 8/24/2013 11:13:00 AM

A wonderful write Linda, congratulations on your win. I enjoyed the read~Caryl

Allen Danie

Date: 8/24/2013 4:30:00 AM

Nice..... A~D

Yadhu Babu

Date: 8/23/2013 6:27:00 AM

GREAAATTTTTTTTTTTTT.............

Skat A

Date: 8/22/2013 9:08:00 PM

A SWEET ONE ALWAYS Picture awesome Perfect. LOVE ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/22/2013 8:06:00 PM

yeah me... thank you Andrea... love ya.... Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2013 3:18:00 PM

This poem is so refreshing, PD! Soft and soothing. Congratulations; you painted those emotions for me!

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 8/22/2013 2:56:00 PM

Lovely piece,wonderful presentation....Congrats on your well deserved win in this contest,Great pal...XOXO...

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/22/2013 2:56:00 PM

I wish the rain dance would bring this over my head......as gentle as described in your poem !! It is parched here at the moment !! Lovely poem.....congrats!!