Picture Perfect

(Gentle Summer Rain)

Listen to:
light pouring silver gray
enriched thoughts fall from the sky
complete path towards-
Blissful, Delighting Peace
small ceremonial rain dance.
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Gentle therapeutic rain
on a warm summer day.
falls of heaven on my skin 
lovely healing memory
smiling tears 
embracing promise land
means of escaping
utopia in a cloud
Solace-
light mist paints the Earth

"Drizzling summer rays."
Swimming in sunshine, rain.



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Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Byte Avatar
February 3, 2014 at 6:20 PM
:-)
Bordner Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 2:30 AM
Ah, loving life, for better or worse, having the strength to smile despite a curse, having the heart to embrace the thirst, the hunger for another first. I love the wisdom of your pen my dearest Poet. Your faithful Angel, Justin.
March Avatar
December 18, 2013 at 1:45 PM
I love the feel of this poem, what wonders , quiet wonders, you show. I feel much like this over the fall of snow at night, Not a raging storm, but heavy soft wonder of it all. Curiously it also made me wonder why things need water, Where did that idea come from. what a poetic idea. Hmm for give the vaugeries of my mind. Lovely contemplative work. Thank you
Gasun Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 12:46 AM
Hi again my dearest sis! Stopping by to read once more this very inspiring stellar poem of yours before I finally log off & go to my nxt class. Enjoying thoroughly again the very wonderful feelings and the very splendid & perfect image of this outstanding poem of my greatest & most fave poet. Thank you so much for sharing! Hope you're doing well my dearest sis & BFF. Sending u my love, smiles and sweetest hugs. God bless! More power & blessings always! Lovem4evr, Leonora
Anish Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 5:10 PM
Sweet summer poem here! As the summer dies we can remeber bmoments lbe so weike the one you describe so well here. Peace & Love Matthew Anish p
Gasun Avatar
September 9, 2013 at 8:58 PM
Hi, my dearest sis! Thank you so much again. I'm glad you appreciated the poem I wrote from the very beautiful lines in one of my favourite precious masterpieces of my only greatest poet, most fave, idol, loving sis and friend. Words aren't enough to thank you for everything. I adore so much that's why I chose yours. That was just a try. I hope I can write free verse soon which is one of my aspirations. Biggest sweet hugs & kisses! lovem4evr, Leonora
Breidenthal Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 4:16 PM
Awesome one! Always, Laura
Montgomery Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 2:51 PM
So beautiful and very therapeutic! Molly
Pratap Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 2:36 AM
nicely done gr8 work do judge my work
Maverick Avatar
August 25, 2013 at 2:06 PM
Enjoyable write you have provided PD thanks for your great comment..'
Alammyan Avatar
August 25, 2013 at 3:10 AM
Thank you so much for your encouragement :) I was going through some of your poems... really awesome work!!! :)
Ryerson Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 8:13 PM
Picture perfect for sure!...Also, I INSIST that you let me put these ice cubes down now...Even my little buddy is getting cold and he does NOT perform very well under such conditions...
Gasun Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 7:58 PM
Hi, my dearest sis! Giving you another big sweetest hugs on another great win of yours with this stupendous write.. always perfect/ outstanding poem & picture as always & in everyway. Huge hearty congratulations again! It's always my great honor to read your poetry & you don't know how happy I am whenever I read it. Thank you, thank you so much for everything! I'm logging off for a while 'cuz I got an appointment w/ my doctor but I'll come back @ soup as soon as I'm done. Tcare always! lovemuch4ever, Leonora
Jones Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 6:32 PM
Congratulations on your perfect poem Linda...
A  Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 5:11 PM
congrats all the way...SKAT
Muzzey Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 11:13 AM
A wonderful write Linda, congratulations on your win. I enjoyed the read~Caryl
Danie Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 4:30 AM
Nice..... A~D
Babu Avatar
August 23, 2013 at 6:27 AM
GREAAATTTTTTTTTTTTT.............
A  Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 9:08 PM
A SWEET ONE ALWAYS Picture awesome Perfect. LOVE ~SKAT~
A   Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 8:06 PM
yeah me... thank you Andrea... love ya.... Linda
Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 3:18 PM
This poem is so refreshing, PD! Soft and soothing. Congratulations; you painted those emotions for me!
Richards Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 2:56 PM
I wish the rain dance would bring this over my head......as gentle as described in your poem !! It is parched here at the moment !! Lovely poem.....congrats!!
Arowolo Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 2:56 PM
Lovely piece,wonderful presentation....Congrats on your well deserved win in this contest,Great pal...XOXO...
May Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 12:34 PM
congrats on a fine win Linda
Lamoureux Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 12:22 PM
Well done, congratulations Linda.
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