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Picture Perfect

I sunk my teeth in
And chomped loudly
I pulled away
juice dribbling down my chin

My macintosh apple
Red as a rose
Sweet as sugar
Juicy like an orange
Shiny like lip gloss
Deformed like a blob
Crunched like chips
Perfect as a picture
Tasted like Heaven

My perfect little apple
Reminds me of the 
Great things our planet 
Has to offer... 
Just like our own little Heaven
We just have to look a little harder

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/7/2009 1:50:00 PM
yay! Jen great poem as always....Maryam
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Date: 1/6/2009 5:04:00 PM
Well done, I enjoyed this one!...Tyesha
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Date: 1/6/2009 4:30:00 PM
nice one... i like *Breana
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