Picture of Innocence

That one brown tuff of hair sticking up
gray eyes not yet turned
Begging for knowledge not yet learned
The forehead and thick eyebrows are her fathers
As much as her round face and crooked pinky toe is surely her mother's
A double chin that holds any spilled food in
And the rolls on those chubby legs
Funny how genetics are passed from nearest kin
That smile can light up a room
Such beauty in watching a child bloom


*NOTE: For my little niece. Love her to death I had to write something about her. :)
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October 14, 2014 at 4:08 PM
Awww that's really adorable. I wrote a poem about niece once too. Course now she's 9 and not quite a baby anymore... haven't been on here in over a year! Good to be back and catch up with old Soup Friends :)
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October 26, 2014 at 3:19 AM
That's awesome!! I adore my niece. Aww they grow up so fast! I've missed you! Haven't been on in a while either. Life has gotten out of control. Which haha made me write more. ;) hope You're doing well!!
Dey Avatar
October 5, 2013 at 11:56 PM
A true loving poem....Heartfelt.
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September 3, 2013 at 11:38 AM
This is very sweet Caleah... what's her name, if you do not mind me asking. very cute... xox~ Linda
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September 6, 2013 at 11:37 AM
Her name is Eila. :D Pronounced I-la. only three months old. :) Thanks so much for commenting! Missed being on here
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September 1, 2013 at 3:58 PM
Hi Caleah, A truly heartfelt write depicting childhood innocence.. Ken
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September 6, 2013 at 11:36 AM
Thanks so much! It's so wonderful watching a baby grow... :)
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