DM Babbit Poet Concrete

Picture It

Look a little closer
 and picture it
the decorative frame
 wrapping around the snapshot taken
a hundred years ago.

                            Over then 
                 D                                   D
                 O                                   O
                 W                                  W     
                 N                                   N
                           and across 
             It is but a memory of visions lost.




Maureen McGreavy's concrete contest Picture It.

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James Horn March 5, 2019 at 4:27 PM Even when I do wait and see, God made each poem for me, And of mine, Special design, Send to you after I set it free

Andrea Dietrich August 31, 2018 at 3:32 PM Yes the title is GREAT for this one. We have but to picture it!

Line Gauthier August 27, 2018 at 8:17 PM Original, DM. Well done.

Nette Onclaud August 27, 2018 at 1:25 PM a blend of visual art and good poetry, DM... well done!..huggs

Jan Allison August 27, 2018 at 1:24 PM what a clever poem DM, I don't think I can come up with anything for this contest, good luck:-) hugs jan xx