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Picnic With My Sweet

We wake up to a lovely day with lots of sun to lead the way. Down to a babbling brook we go while tree branches swing to and fro. And we have found the perfect spot to be alone and kiss a lot! A checkered napkin covers up this feast on which we soon will sup. All sorts of good food did I bring to feed my lover and my king! There's fried chicken,fresh fruit and cheese with lots of goodies made to please. We have a bottle of sweet wine to sip on as we sit and dine. The birds are singing in the sky; they're serenading he and I. There's so much beauty in this place and love light shining on his face. A perfect day starts to wind down as we pack up and head to town. The memory of this day will last long after summertime has passed. for contest"Picnic Time" sponsored by Carol brown

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Date: 5/20/2011 10:29:00 PM
yummy and it sounds like the perfect day of a picnic! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/19/2011 9:40:00 AM
It truly does sound like a perfect day, Deb, one you will never forget. Congrats on your first-place win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/19/2011 8:15:00 AM
Excellent poetry Deb, Congratulations on your big win.love , gautami
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Date: 5/18/2011 5:40:00 PM
Deb,so great to see you at the top of the list with this classic. Congratulations on your poem's honored first place. Agape, MOses
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Date: 5/18/2011 11:12:00 AM
Congrats Deb on your 1st place win in the contest.
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Date: 5/18/2011 9:58:00 AM
So peaceful serene "those were the good ole days!" lovely winning write. Light & Love
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Date: 5/18/2011 8:56:00 AM
What a lovely, quiet, special time. Congratulations on your first place. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/18/2011 7:39:00 AM
Congrats on this top spot win! Such a romantic and lovely picnic! Gwendolen
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Date: 5/18/2011 7:33:00 AM
Such a lovely, and melodic poem of a wonderful day! Lovely!!! Congratulations, Deb!!
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Date: 5/18/2011 6:53:00 AM
Accept my congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Deb
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Date: 5/18/2011 6:52:00 AM
Congrats on this excellent, well written, well deserved 1st Place win, Deb. Kudos. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 5/18/2011 6:42:00 AM
this is very nice congrats on your win.. cory
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Date: 5/18/2011 4:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem placing in my contest Deb. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/9/2011 1:39:00 PM
very nice Debbie.. nice flow and feeling.. always Michael
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