Anitha Jayasankar Poet Tetractys

Picnic Time

A 
day with
family
at nearby stream, 
devouring mom's home-made delicacies;
Fun with cool water creeking, paper boats, 
boating, tire-swing
moments of
gleeful
joy


Date: 08/29/2021
Number of the photo chosen: 2
Double Tetractys 8 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Jeanne Mcgee September 11, 2021 at 7:17 PM Congratulations on your number one spot... Great nostalga of another time.

Beata Agustin September 11, 2021 at 12:10 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, making me nostalgic of family bonding times. God bless you.

Paula Goldsmith September 10, 2021 at 7:24 AM Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" and fun write. Wish I was there. Have a blessed day.............

Kim Rodrigues September 9, 2021 at 7:41 PM Wonderful, Anitha! Congratulations!

Eve Roper September 9, 2021 at 5:57 PM Congratulations on your win, Anitha, great flow. Hugs Eve Anitha Jayasankar September 26, 2021 at 9:07 AM Thank you SO much dear Eve for the lovely contest... Hugs... ~ Ani

Regina Mcintosh September 9, 2021 at 5:20 PM Wonderful. Love it. Congrats on your top place. God bless you, Love, Gina

Linda Craddick September 2, 2021 at 12:18 PM This is such a happy, joyful poem for a simple family day. I love it! Linda

Jan Allison September 1, 2021 at 9:07 AM what delightful imagery Ani:-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar August 30, 2021 at 1:15 AM Brilliantly executed, Ani. Wish you all the best. Hugs.

JC Brul August 29, 2021 at 7:45 PM Simple yet delectable!! Sweet moments very well conveyed in few words!! Lovely!

Darlene De Beaulieu August 29, 2021 at 3:58 PM Hello Anitha, picnics are fun with familyand frends. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich August 29, 2021 at 10:04 AM Perfect, Ani. You chose same picture I chose too! I liked that picture best.

Tom Cunningham August 29, 2021 at 9:05 AM Creating memories of a beautiful family day. Good luck in the contest Ani. Hope you've had a lovely day. Tom

Joanna Daniel August 29, 2021 at 4:34 AM Very well described, Anitha:)