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Pickles and Prackles

Prickles and prackles Arizona cacti living her truth Soaking up the sun Twirling it in her mind Saturating her body Prickly not tickly Mexican flowers enjoying the desert Sitting in the sun Taking her time Sunbathing nude Children running toward her With open arms And tiny soft fingers The first time Wanting to touch her yellow buds And cheerful prickles Until they do

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Date: 1/23/2020 4:54:00 PM
"Until they do." Nice touch. I mean ouch. Enjoyed this.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/24/2020 5:56:00 AM
Thank you Eric. I appreciate you stopping by!
Date: 1/23/2020 1:42:00 PM
Aaahhh, the life of a cactus.... and the mysterious magnetic attraction between cacti and children! LOVE how you ended this!! ;D
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/24/2020 5:56:00 AM
I remember the first time I ran for one and OUCH!
Date: 1/23/2020 8:31:00 AM
Great title! With great abandon, you write!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/23/2020 10:02:00 AM
I just throw it down, Kim. Wondering if it makes sense later. Grin.

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