Pickles

Tangled measures in spirited affections
to my one an only love mind pickles 
a bit sour tho i have tasted worse
unpleasant feeling let loose
heart aching fondness of nature
tears taking a drop like metal
that strong an heavy, smooth of petal

O' climb ripple my waves and cuddle 
oppose them to drop that figure 
i envy another; heart pickles occur
lean thou art has much yet never seen 
shoulders can tell more than they mean
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kalishian Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 1:59 AM
O th' last line like th' climbing bine a gold mine thou art how divine. thanks rick.
Wolf Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 11:58 PM
You have a real unique style of stringing words together, I really like the last line /|\
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