Diana-Marie Bombardieri Poet Couplet

Pickles

sour pickles make me sick
all it takes is just one lick
dare, not truth, is what I pick
now I fear I will feel ick

to ease the torture, my nose I clip
lifting a green fiend to my lip
blah! Yuck! Would taste improve with spice?
or perhaps chill the beasts on ice?

to honour my dare, I fight down a slice
all the while hoping, my rival gets lice

05/23/12
For Catie Lindsey's CONTEST: Word Games

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Beata Agustin April 10, 2024 at 8:36 PM Today, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A February 7, 2016 at 11:03 PM WELL DONE

David Scott January 11, 2013 at 12:35 PM LOVE IT MATE COOL VERSE XXDAVIDSCOTT

Dan Kearley May 23, 2012 at 11:51 PM Diana,do you really hate pickles that much? Ha,ha...Good luck in the contest. :o)

Deborah Burch May 23, 2012 at 7:13 PM LMAO!!!!!Vie this is tooo tooo funny!! Well Done my friend! best winning wishes! love ya, deb Diana-Marie Bombardieri May 23, 2012 at 8:44 PM this is actually her daughter;) Diana. Thanks for thinking my poem was funny:)

Russell Sivey May 23, 2012 at 5:42 PM Ha ha, this is quite the funny write! I really enjoyed your delightful and magnificent little poem! You did excellent with this write! You'll do well in the contest! Great Work!!