Pickles

Tin bath in back yard,
Full of shallots for peeling.
Pickles for Christmas!





For Brian's "Images of Fall" contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Mason Avatar
August 22, 2009 at 10:57 AM
Beautifully done, Frances. Good luck in the contest ... this is surely a winner!
Richards Avatar
August 19, 2009 at 1:41 PM
Love this unique entry for the contest!! Wish I was on your Christmas list....my hubby loves homemade pickles!! :) ~ Carrie
Strand Avatar
August 19, 2009 at 11:23 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Frances.Rgds Brian
Brown Avatar
August 19, 2009 at 10:31 AM
Wishing you good luck in the contest Francis. Yummy yummy. Love, Carol
Higgins Avatar
August 19, 2009 at 9:19 AM
My goodness this is good..wowzer..digging this piece. Best wishes in the contest.
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