Pick Up the Pen

words filling empty thoughts
'needs' and 'wants' they tend to cross
letting our surroundings chime in
no longer do we know where we're being driven
consider every desire, but our own
can't even hear our internal tone
honesty,
has died with chivalry.

we look around before we answer
hoping someone else steps up faster
changing for the sake of image
not realizing all the damage

we listen to the moon,
that makes us take a step back.
we listen to the wind,
who blows us way off track.
we listen to the sun,
who has a different way of 'fun' .

we ignore the flowers,
who try to tell us this life is ours.
we ignore the rocks,who try to show us how to be unique.
we ignore the dirt,passing it off as simply bleak.
we ignore the clouds,who are just aiming for our protection.
we ignore anything that shows true affection.

instead of appreciating the rain,
we sit here and complain.
hoping our stories will finish themselves,
not once questioning how we felt.

should we breath for a second?
hear our thoughts come in, let them
should we listen to the flowers?
the rocks, the dirt, the rain, the clouds?
should we listen to our hearts? and then..
for once, pick up the pen.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Meade Stephenson Avatar
January 5, 2010 at 9:18 AM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup family Amanda! This is a poignant write...great imagery and a powerful message conveyed! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes. Many thanks too for your kind comments! Have a blessed day~Mary
Martinez Avatar
January 4, 2010 at 5:11 PM
Thanks for the welcomming Carol and Linda. i'm glad you enjoyed what you have read of my work, best to you as well . thank you again for the positive feedback
Sweetheart Avatar
January 4, 2010 at 2:28 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. may your stay here be a long one and your new year be filled with blessings.. luv.. creativeness.. friendships.. health.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your poetry tonight.. looking forward to many more writes from your gifted pen..
Brown Avatar
January 4, 2010 at 7:57 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Amanda. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Martinez Avatar
January 4, 2010 at 3:55 AM
thank you both . i love getting positive feedback on something that comes pretty natural. but that's our problem, its all about what others think now. people don't even consider their own thoughts and feelings anymore . it's kind of, idk pathetic? but im glad you guys enjoyed this poem and share my point of view
Taylor Avatar
January 3, 2010 at 1:12 PM
I thought this poem was beautiful, true, and very sad because it is exactly how life is. But it is refreshing to find someone who can articulate it so well.
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