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"Sometimes I feel the weight of my previous self straining against my bones...."

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Date: 5/18/2015 1:21:00 PM
TEDDY, DID YOU NOT PLACE IN THIS CONTEST... ENJOYED. SKAT
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/4/2015 7:10:00 AM
Thank you so much buddy! *^_^*
Date: 4/30/2015 10:50:00 PM
a very interesting one,Teddy. One I never heard before!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/2/2015 10:08:00 AM
Thank you Andrea! ^_^
Date: 4/30/2015 8:07:00 AM
This one great Teddy. Love-R
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/30/2015 11:17:00 AM
Thank you so much Rajat! ;-)
Date: 4/30/2015 7:43:00 AM
great one Teddy good luck - this contest will fill up very quickly:-) hugs Jan xx
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/30/2015 11:18:00 AM
Thank you for your best wishes Jan! ^_^

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