Pick Up Line

"Sometimes I feel the weight of my previous self straining against my bones...."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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May 18, 2015 at 1:21 PM
TEDDY, DID YOU NOT PLACE IN THIS CONTEST... ENJOYED. SKAT
Kimathi Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 7:10 AM
Thank you so much buddy! *^_^*
Dietrich Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 10:50 PM
a very interesting one,Teddy. One I never heard before!
Kimathi Avatar
May 2, 2015 at 10:08 AM
Thank you Andrea! ^_^
Chakrabarty Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 8:07 AM
This one great Teddy. Love-R
Kimathi Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 11:17 AM
Thank you so much Rajat! ;-)
Allison Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 7:43 AM
great one Teddy good luck - this contest will fill up very quickly:-) hugs Jan xx
Kimathi Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 11:18 AM
Thank you for your best wishes Jan! ^_^
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