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Pick Me Up

PICK ME UP! Wow! She is looking this way. She is so beautiful. I love the way her hips sway. If I just would speak to her, I know she would smile. I love this cougar’s eyes. I know I am a younger man. I must muster up the nerves to ask her out on a date but I am afraid she will kick me to the curve. I will try to get to know her. ...Meeting of Minds... Hello, my name is Ron. How are you today? I am doing just fine. My name is Eloise. I saw you standing here and decide to notice. Okay Ron, do you want to take me on a date? Yes. Well, if you not in a hurry, lunch is game. I have a hour and a half to waste before I have to catch my train. Here is a table. We must place our orders. Now that that is done let us exchange our email addresses and telephone numbers. _______________________| Penned April 26, 2014! For Richard Lamoureux Contest Gender Bender!

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/19/2014 2:29:00 PM

anytime...Linda

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 6/19/2014 2:38:00 PM

Is the right time... Verlena

Sam Raj

Date: 6/19/2014 10:32:00 AM

Hi. Verlena, Congrats on the win. A enjoyable write. Direct to the point. Thanks for sharing Keep in touch

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 6/19/2014 10:37:00 AM

Thanks Sam. I will do just that... Verlena

Tim Smith

Date: 6/19/2014 6:57:00 AM

A lovely story...Congrats

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 6/19/2014 7:37:00 AM

Thanks Tim... Verlena

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/18/2014 11:34:00 PM

Hi Verlena, Congratulations:)~ Enjoyed, reading every awesome poem on Richard's L, Gender Bender winning list. ... XoX.... LINDA

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 6/19/2014 5:20:00 AM

Thanks Linda for your supportive remarks.

Skat A

Date: 6/18/2014 1:05:00 PM

Verlena, Congratulations on your sweet win, awesome Gender Bender win...SKAT

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 6/18/2014 2:13:00 PM

Thanks Skat for your supportive remarks.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/18/2014 12:21:00 PM

wonderful write Verlena sorry i missed this first time round - a well deserved winner. hugs Jan xxxx

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 6/18/2014 2:14:00 PM

Thanks Jan for your supportive remarks.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/18/2014 10:15:00 AM

Congratulations on the fine win in the contest Gender Bender,

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 6/18/2014 2:14:00 PM

Thanks Dr. Ram for your supportive remarks.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/18/2014 9:10:00 AM

My brother sent me a picture with a naked woman laying on a tree branch and it said beware of cougars. Underneath it said I didn't need to worry because they only go after young men. Congratulations on your win in my contest.

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 6/18/2014 2:16:00 PM

Rick, that depends on how old the cougar is. Thanks for your support of me in your contest.

Casarah Nance

Date: 4/26/2014 7:06:00 PM

Well done! Good luck in the contest, was a pleasure to read this Verlena :)

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/27/2014 6:48:00 AM

Thanks Casarah for your positive feedback and remarks... Verlena

Jeremy Street

Date: 4/26/2014 5:49:00 PM

I Remember Long Ago Now, When We Were Yet A Child, This Newness Amid It All The Rushing Tides Inside; Thinking, Can This Baby Be, Loved ? Nay Not Today Their Jester Sang As Time Replied: Somewhere Else Perhaps Another Day....Love, Jeremy

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/26/2014 5:55:00 PM

Say What? LOL Jeremy... Thanks for your comments on this poem... You are in love with a cougar? Verlena