Pick Me Up

PICK ME UP!
Wow! She is looking this way.
She is so beautiful.
I love the way her hips sway.
If I just would speak to her,
I know she would smile.
I love this cougar’s eyes.
I know I am a younger man.
I must muster up the nerves
to ask her out on a date but
I am afraid she will kick me to the curve.
I will try to get to know her.

...Meeting of Minds...

Hello, my name is Ron.
How are you today?
I am doing just fine.
My name is Eloise.
I saw you standing here and decide to notice.
Okay Ron, do you want to take me on a date?
Yes.
Well, if you not in a hurry, lunch is game.
I have a hour and a half to waste 
before I have to catch my train.
Here is a table.
We must place our orders.
Now that that is done let us exchange 
our email addresses and telephone numbers.
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Penned April 26, 2014!
For Richard Lamoureux Contest Gender Bender!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A   Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 2:29 PM
anytime...Linda
Walker  Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 2:38 PM
Is the right time... Verlena
Raj Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 10:32 AM
Hi. Verlena, Congrats on the win. A enjoyable write. Direct to the point. Thanks for sharing Keep in touch
Walker  Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 10:37 AM
Thanks Sam. I will do just that... Verlena
Smith Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 6:57 AM
A lovely story...Congrats
Walker  Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 7:37 AM
Thanks Tim... Verlena
A   Avatar
June 18, 2014 at 11:34 PM
Hi Verlena, Congratulations:)~ Enjoyed, reading every awesome poem on Richard's L, Gender Bender winning list. ... XoX.... LINDA
Walker  Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 5:20 AM
Thanks Linda for your supportive remarks.
A  Avatar
June 18, 2014 at 1:05 PM
Verlena, Congratulations on your sweet win, awesome Gender Bender win...SKAT
Walker  Avatar
June 18, 2014 at 2:13 PM
Thanks Skat for your supportive remarks.
Allison Avatar
June 18, 2014 at 12:21 PM
wonderful write Verlena sorry i missed this first time round - a well deserved winner. hugs Jan xxxx
Walker  Avatar
June 18, 2014 at 2:14 PM
Thanks Jan for your supportive remarks.
Mehta Avatar
June 18, 2014 at 10:15 AM
Congratulations on the fine win in the contest Gender Bender,
Walker  Avatar
June 18, 2014 at 2:14 PM
Thanks Dr. Ram for your supportive remarks.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 18, 2014 at 9:10 AM
My brother sent me a picture with a naked woman laying on a tree branch and it said beware of cougars. Underneath it said I didn't need to worry because they only go after young men. Congratulations on your win in my contest.
Walker  Avatar
June 18, 2014 at 2:16 PM
Rick, that depends on how old the cougar is. Thanks for your support of me in your contest.
Nance Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 7:06 PM
Well done! Good luck in the contest, was a pleasure to read this Verlena :)
Walker  Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 6:48 AM
Thanks Casarah for your positive feedback and remarks... Verlena
Street Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 5:49 PM
I Remember Long Ago Now, When We Were Yet A Child, This Newness Amid It All The Rushing Tides Inside; Thinking, Can This Baby Be, Loved ? Nay Not Today Their Jester Sang As Time Replied: Somewhere Else Perhaps Another Day....Love, Jeremy
Walker  Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 5:55 PM
Say What? LOL Jeremy... Thanks for your comments on this poem... You are in love with a cougar? Verlena
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