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Pick Me Up

PICK ME UP!
Wow! She is looking this way.
She is so beautiful.
I love the way her hips sway.
If I just would speak to her,
I know she would smile.
I love this cougar’s eyes.
I know I am a younger man.
I must muster up the nerves
to ask her out on a date but
I am afraid she will kick me to the curve.
I will try to get to know her.

...Meeting of Minds...

Hello, my name is Ron.
How are you today?
I am doing just fine.
My name is Eloise.
I saw you standing here and decide to notice.
Okay Ron, do you want to take me on a date?
Yes.
Well, if you not in a hurry, lunch is game.
I have a hour and a half to waste 
before I have to catch my train.
Here is a table.
We must place our orders.
Now that that is done let us exchange 
our email addresses and telephone numbers.
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Penned April 26, 2014!
For Richard Lamoureux Contest Gender Bender!

Copyright © Verlena S. Walker | Year Posted 2014

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/19/2014 2:29:00 PM anytime...Linda Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 6/19/2014 2:38:00 PM Is the right time... Verlena

Sam Raj Date: 6/19/2014 10:32:00 AM Hi. Verlena, Congrats on the win. A enjoyable write. Direct to the point. Thanks for sharing Keep in touch Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 6/19/2014 10:37:00 AM Thanks Sam. I will do just that... Verlena

Tim Smith Date: 6/19/2014 6:57:00 AM A lovely story...Congrats Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 6/19/2014 7:37:00 AM Thanks Tim... Verlena

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/18/2014 11:34:00 PM Hi Verlena, Congratulations:)~ Enjoyed, reading every awesome poem on Richard's L, Gender Bender winning list. ... XoX.... LINDA Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 6/19/2014 5:20:00 AM Thanks Linda for your supportive remarks.

Skat A Date: 6/18/2014 1:05:00 PM Verlena, Congratulations on your sweet win, awesome Gender Bender win...SKAT Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 6/18/2014 2:13:00 PM Thanks Skat for your supportive remarks.

Jan Allison Date: 6/18/2014 12:21:00 PM wonderful write Verlena sorry i missed this first time round - a well deserved winner. hugs Jan xxxx Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 6/18/2014 2:14:00 PM Thanks Jan for your supportive remarks.

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 6/18/2014 10:15:00 AM Congratulations on the fine win in the contest Gender Bender, Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 6/18/2014 2:14:00 PM Thanks Dr. Ram for your supportive remarks.

Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/18/2014 9:10:00 AM My brother sent me a picture with a naked woman laying on a tree branch and it said beware of cougars. Underneath it said I didn't need to worry because they only go after young men. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 6/18/2014 2:16:00 PM Rick, that depends on how old the cougar is. Thanks for your support of me in your contest.

Casarah Nance Date: 4/26/2014 7:06:00 PM Well done! Good luck in the contest, was a pleasure to read this Verlena :) Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 4/27/2014 6:48:00 AM Thanks Casarah for your positive feedback and remarks... Verlena

Jeremy Street Date: 4/26/2014 5:49:00 PM I Remember Long Ago Now, When We Were Yet A Child, This Newness Amid It All The Rushing Tides Inside; Thinking, Can This Baby Be, Loved ? Nay Not Today Their Jester Sang As Time Replied: Somewhere Else Perhaps Another Day....Love, Jeremy Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 4/26/2014 5:55:00 PM Say What? LOL Jeremy... Thanks for your comments on this poem... You are in love with a cougar? Verlena