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- Pic Motifs--Visual 2

Tempter shrouds his cold flame 
hovers dwelling in pleasure,
with no remorse 
to lay a kiss
on the sleeping soul at their weakest
as they lodge in fear.

11/18/2017

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Anisha Dutta

November 22, 2017 at 12:27 PM

Congrats Eve to win top on your visualisation

Constance La France

November 21, 2017 at 4:44 PM

Eve, oh so deep and dark, congratulations on your win !

Paul Callus

November 21, 2017 at 4:26 PM

Excellent take on this visual which was open to so many different interpretations, Eve! ~ Congratulations on placing first! Hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich

November 20, 2017 at 11:52 PM

Wow, what a great job of it, Eve. Congrats on your top win.

Afzal Nusker

November 20, 2017 at 9:42 PM

Excellent work, Eve. Congrats on your first place win.

Joseph May

November 20, 2017 at 4:26 PM

Congrats on your top win Eve

Nette Onclaud

November 20, 2017 at 2:31 PM

incredible development of images with an ending which left me on edge, eve...finest congrats on your bestest win and thanks for sharing this gem!..huggs

Eve Roper

November 20, 2017 at 3:04 PM

Thank you, Nette,, Hugs Eve ~`*

Connie Marcum Wong

November 20, 2017 at 1:14 PM

This picture was the popular one and you did a fantastic job Eve! I am so happy to see this entry get First place! I think this picture is Nette's favorite too. I really liked it too but the world map was a better choice for me. Congratulations! : )

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 20, 2017 at 12:43 PM

- A well deserved first place dear Eve, congratulations ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

November 18, 2017 at 12:08 PM

Very nicely done, Eve. I bet this picture is the most popular one. I honestly couldn't think of a thing for the other two!!

Silent One

November 18, 2017 at 11:56 AM

This is a spooky image and you created creepy image... In the cyber world you never know if people are what they say.. Good luck in the contest..

Russell Sivey

November 18, 2017 at 10:47 AM

I really enjoyed reading your delightfully frightening write! You have spooked me by this incredibly dark, but wondrous poem! I love poems like this, they are cleverly scary and truthful at times, but can be remedied! As we all delve into a depressive stance at times...we can get out of it also...trust me, I know from a harsh experience! Great work my friend!!